Friday, August 24, 2012

Lopsided

                                                        (Image Source: http://hplusmagazine.com)



Leaning dangerously,
Sick,
Feverish,
Dust clustered,
Through the narrow lanes,
Evil ruling the roost,
Lies,
Betrayal,
Deceit,
Honesty paving way,
For dishonesty,
Dismal,
Dejected,
Unruly natives,
Now joining hands,
Monster still strong,
The balance in its favor,
Clinging heavily,
The Earth tilted,
Lopsided,
With the weight of the sins,
The Devils who reside,
Peeping into the core,
Digging deeper,
Aah, miracle awaited,
A much needed blessing,
In disguise, or whatever,
Save our planet,
And our souls.


This Poem is shared with One Single Impression and the Prompt is Lopsided.


34 comments:

  1. like..the lopsidedness is palpable.

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  2. Definitely a beautiful poem.

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  3. Well said!
    The world needs to somehow try to regain its balance and stop all the madness which is occurring in the recent times. Great writing!

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  4. Love what you wrote on the theme. Since the last few weeks, a lot of political and social turmoil is going on particularly in the North East and yes, really a miracle can save us-in Gita it is written that when there is a decline in the ways of humanity then God appears...

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  5. Beautiful poem ,, nd the picture ~~ too good !!Really :)

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  6. The violence is certainly on a rise.. What La Dolce Said, makes sense. It has been said that when things get really bad.. God will appear.. and yes, times are very bad right now.. All over the world! And it's not just because of the violence.. although it makes the rising gas prices and the severe droughts and troubled economy a lot worse.. I believe we'll get our miracle.. We just gotta believe.

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    1. Yeah ... belief and trust goes a long way in eradicating the evils !!!

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  7. So true.....you made it so well.....loved this one...

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  8. Amen. A savior badly needed.

    Well put.

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  9. I have a different interpretation of the poem.. but I could be wrong. Nonetheless, it's beautiful.

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    1. Interpretations are never wrong ... they are just different sides of the same coin :-)

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  10. Written so well! This earth, our environment, and everything needs a savior in any form at this rate. You put it beautifully :)
    And thanks for the comments on my blog. Very much appreciated!

    ❤Not Just My Allegories❤

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  11. so true Green Speck...earth "is" lopsided!

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  12. Very intense and wonderful poem. I love this so much. From the photo prompt to your words, very true and so deep. hugs shakira

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  13. Oh, I'm so glad I saw this one. Love it. Great imagination.

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  14. Miracles DO happen! Very nice write.
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  15. Sorry a very ir-relevant question here. How did you added the reply option for incoming comments. Please do reply if you get time. Thanks :)

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    1. I would love to help you buddy ... but I didn't get your question ... The "reply" option for comments will always be there, it's also in your blog. Please let me know if you have any doubts and I will try to help you out :-)

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