Weave castles in sand,
Dreams shaped in myriad grains,
Shining bright with hope.
Waves run with passion,
Destruction and creation,
Talent stays, survives.
Embracing challenge,
New found zeal and energy,
He begins again.
Castle stands erect,
Symbolizes his talent,
Eyes brimming with pride.
This Haiku is written for Sensational Haiku Wednesday and the Prompt is Talent.
peaceful yet fun. Nice
ReplyDeleteEnchanting talent.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful take!
ReplyDeleteThank You Simran :-)
DeleteWhile reading this haiku I felt that it's a recollection of your blogging journey, of how you left and then returned with so much zeal.
ReplyDeleteWhat amazes me is that you make time for writing each and every day. That is plausible and shows how much you love writing.
May be you are right ... I noticed that my blogging journey too is on the same line ... I write daily 'cause I love to write, and I want to grow and improve my writing ... thanks for being so supportive :-)
DeleteBeautiful story here! We all should begin...never stop...Lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
DeleteLovely....saw it all while reading.....enjoyed.....
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
Deletemagical talent here ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol :-)
DeleteExcellent writing. We should never lose hope :) Cheers!
ReplyDeleteThank You Ruby :-)
DeleteHope is what keeps most of us going, faith, hope and love!! Three of God's most precious blessings! Beautiful haiku!! As always!
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal :-)
DeleteVery nice, I love these. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank You Link :-)
DeleteWaves run with passion,
ReplyDeleteDestruction and creation
How true this is, of both the waves of human invention and the waves of the sea. Bravo!
Very nice!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Rebecca :-)
DeleteThank you for your cute comment!
ReplyDeleteLove
/S / http:// mydarlingsolitude.blogspot.com
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Thanks S :-)
DeleteLovely - eternal talent. Thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteThank You Suzy :-)
DeleteReally enjoyed the contrasts of the waves and sand. Love how you wove them all together. Wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
Deletegreat series of Haiku
ReplyDeleteperfect for summer
Thank You Moon Dust Writer :-)
Deletewish i was that talented! awesome words accompanying that sand castle!
ReplyDeleteThanks Tara :-)
DeleteGreat Haiku...you are really talented!
ReplyDeleteThank You Dark Angel :-)
DeleteThere was a nice flow to the poem, Amrit. I esp. liked the following stanza:
ReplyDelete"Waves run with passion,
Destruction and creation,
Talent stays, survives."
I believe, this was the crux of the message you had to convey. Brilliant! :)
It takes a lot of talent to erect one of those and your great talent to describe it..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Katy :-)
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