This goes very nicely with chapter 9.. Sojourning among my hopes, rising and falling. Very beautiful and yet it shows vulnerability.
...ripples on the waves ~ lovely visual words for a wonderful haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)
Thanks Carol :-)
Its dreamy..like falling from the sky!
Thank You Dark Angel :-)
Nice use of the word... A lovely imagery created! Special!
Thanks Vaishali :-)
Oh so lovely, it makes me breathe a little slower just reading it. loved those words "cool breeze hums and sings" Beautiful!
Truly sensational...very nice, Haiku :)
Thanks a lot :-)
Thanks Vinisha :-)
Lovely, the second stanza is so beautiful......
Thanks Sreeja :-)
Soujourn. Such a beautiful word and you did it justice. Loved how you used the image of water to convey life's cycles, the rise and fall of hope.
Thank You Gabrielle :-)
Both sojourns are lovely. You've got a knack for haiku, I see.
Thanks Rosie :-)
This goes very nicely with chapter 9.. Sojourning among my hopes, rising and falling. Very beautiful and yet it shows vulnerability.
ReplyDelete...ripples on the waves ~ lovely visual words for a wonderful haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol :-)
DeleteIts dreamy..like falling from the sky!
ReplyDeleteThank You Dark Angel :-)
DeleteNice use of the word... A lovely imagery created! Special!
ReplyDeleteThanks Vaishali :-)
DeleteOh so lovely, it makes me breathe a little slower just reading it. loved those words "cool breeze hums and sings" Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteTruly sensational...very nice, Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteThanks Vinisha :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely, the second stanza is so beautiful......
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja :-)
DeleteSoujourn. Such a beautiful word and you did it justice. Loved how you used the image of water to convey life's cycles, the rise and fall of hope.
ReplyDeleteThank You Gabrielle :-)
DeleteBoth sojourns are lovely. You've got a knack for haiku, I see.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosie :-)
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