Thursday, August 16, 2012

Sojourn - Haiku

                                                    (Image Source: http://www.spiritually-true.com)


Melody unheard,
Sojourn; temporary dreams,
Cool breeze hums and sings.

Ripples on the waves,
Sojourning among my hopes,
Rising and falling.



This Haiku is shared with Sensational Haiku Wednesday and the Prompt is Sojourn.




20 comments:

  1. This goes very nicely with chapter 9.. Sojourning among my hopes, rising and falling. Very beautiful and yet it shows vulnerability.

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  2. ...ripples on the waves ~ lovely visual words for a wonderful haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  3. Its dreamy..like falling from the sky!

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  4. Nice use of the word... A lovely imagery created! Special!

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  5. Oh so lovely, it makes me breathe a little slower just reading it. loved those words "cool breeze hums and sings" Beautiful!

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  6. Truly sensational...very nice, Haiku :)

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  7. Lovely, the second stanza is so beautiful......

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  8. Soujourn. Such a beautiful word and you did it justice. Loved how you used the image of water to convey life's cycles, the rise and fall of hope.

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  9. Both sojourns are lovely. You've got a knack for haiku, I see.

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