Saturday, August 04, 2012

Stars - Haiku

                                                      (Image Source: http://worldchallengeallstars.com)


Stars being the prompt,
Twinkle Twinkle Little Star,
Diving back in time.

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Love, lust, whatever,
Starry eyes await the balm,
Time healing all wounds.

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Dancing to the rhythm,
Moon awakes the swaying crest,
Born to be a star.

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Richness in her name,
Poverty strikes another,
Can't control your stars.


This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Stars.








32 comments:

  1. I like your share specially diving back in time ~

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  2. I like them all but, really like the 4th Haiku. :) Thanks for visiting me.

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  3. love all
    but really like the first one.. twinkle twinkle flashback to time. nicely done!

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    1. To be honest, I too like the first one :-) took me back to school days :-)

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  4. Four different aspects of the prompt star! Very creative!

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  5. I liked all the takes on the prompt, Amrit.

    The 4th one strikes as magnificent to me. :) Lovely read!

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  6. I see the prompt left you rather inspired! A lovely collection of Haiku stars

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  7. you saved the best for the last!!
    great one :)

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  8. Oh, you weaved so many hues..well done.. I loved the last the most..

    Thanks.

    RS:)

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    1. Just trying to learn from you Sir :-)

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  9. A wonderful collection of haiku fare! Amazingly there are varied stars all for the asking. If only we get most of them all the time! Wonderful write Green!

    Hank

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  10. "Can't control your stars." Is that another way of saying that our destinies are written in the stars but we really have no say where the stars may lead us?

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    1. Well ... probably that's what I tried to convey :-)

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  11. I too loved the last the most. The first one brought a twinkle!

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  12. The third one is my favorite--lovely image of the mooon and stars. :)

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  13. Lovely set....The first one brought smile on my face :)

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  14. Destiny and fate are something we cannot control. Its in the stars indeed.

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  15. Awesome! I don't need to say more ... very well done

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