Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Owl

(Image Source: http://www.sciencephoto.com)


two orange moons
shine outside my window
hooting with the stars


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Owl.





56 comments:

  1. orange moons!! a cute haiku! loved it.
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    Already Awake

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  2. hooting with the stars - love that

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  3. The owl's eyes are like orange moons. A stunning metaphor!

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  4. Wonderful! And that photo is a hoot!

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  5. the metaphors were superb..
    owls always fascinated me..strange creatures aren't they :)

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  6. wow...i love those two orange moons...awesome!

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  7. Yup the idea of creating a metaphor of two orange moons gelled well and this is a perfect haiku and the pic is apt.

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  8. Wonderful imagery!!! Excellent really!

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  9. Oh yes indeed orange moons... enjoyed GS - thank you

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  10. Awesome choice of words..
    Green speck the use of Orange moon is unique

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  11. Wow the concept of orange moon is fascinating!
    Good one!

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  12. Absolute delight...You have imagimed it so well...

    RS

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  13. This is a delight. And so many haikus aren't.

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  14. May have looked like the large orange full moon!! and the opera that followed!!

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  15. speck done a good job of scaring us with a picture & enthralling us with
    splendid lines..smiles:))God<3u

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  16. and holding all captive...
    very nice my friend

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  17. Liked the metaphor. Unique and intriguing ! Kudos to your imagination:)

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  18. Great use of colour. Impressive metaphor

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  19. It's so beautiful. Yes, I agree with others' comments about the metaphor.
    You're very creative. :)

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  20. I like the imagery. I love the composition and I like how you compared an owl's eyes with orange moon. Very creative.

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  21. That's great, very descriptive x

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  22. Agree with the others who have commented. Indeed, an awesome choice of words. Especially "orange moon"!

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  23. You had me chuckling there, Amrit. How cute is this! :D

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  24. Picture and haiku go very well together! Enjoyed.

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  25. I love this! That last line is perfect.

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  26. Never saw that in real...it must be fascinating ...I am sure

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  27. good one.. loved the concept of orange moon.. never heard before..

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