Monday, August 13, 2012

Bathing

                                                           (Image Source: http://mi9.com)

Souls unhook,
Passions reboot,
Hearts laid bare,
Piercing stare,
Aromatic session,
Going through the motion,
I don't wanna care what's wrong or right,
Bathing in your love in this moonless night.

Serving to your command,
You have me summoned,
Down to my feet,
That's where we meet,
Story so old,
Dare to be bold,
A new daily act,
Serving our pact.

I don't wanna care what's wrong or right,
Bathing in your love in this moonless night.

Blush,
Hush,
Rush,
Crush,
Sums up the journey,
Pleasure and Pain,
I am your muse,
Waiting to be slain.

Hidden in the cloud,
A cry so loud,
Meanders through my vein,
My thoughts insane,
Fearing I am lost,
Sold for a cost,
Yet, I silently witness the loot,
The ecstasy of plundering renders me mute.

I just don't wanna care what's wrong or right,
Bathing in your love in this moonless night.


This Poem is shared with One Single Impression and the Prompt is Bathing.





28 comments:

  1. ah the music of love. awesome write. i like how it spiral down to a place named forever

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  2. very very very beautiful.. oh my goodness! :)

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  3. Great rhyme, atmosphere - excellent write.

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  4. My oh my!
    You come up with such love filled poems. What a portrayal!!!

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  5. Hi Amrit!

    Your poetry amazes me! Each time you come up with excellence! Reading you is always refreshing. :)
    Best wishes to you

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    1. Thanks for such lovely words buddy. I get inspired by poets like you, who create magic such effortlessly with their words :-)

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  6. This is mind blowing! Brilliant. That's all I can say. You are genius.

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    1. I am not a genius .... Just trying to write whatever come to my mind :-)

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  7. No words, but a question: When are you publishing your poetry book? Believe me, Amrit, when I say this, I'm not writing just another comment but I mean it. You are brilliant at it. Amazing flow. I'll read it again! Thanks! :)

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    1. I will publish as soon as I learn writing poems :-)

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    2. You give yourself far less credit than you deserve, Amrit!

      I have awarded Live Your Life with A Lovely Blog Award. Here's the link: http://twitamic.blogspot.in/2012/08/one-lovely-blog-award.html

      Congrats! :) Do let me know if you've received the notification. :)

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    3. Thanks a lot Vaishali ... this is a real Honor ... thanks a million :-)

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  8. Very catchy bathing, G.S. ~~ "I just don't wanna care what's wrong or right," just bathe in your love. I am having a fit figuring out to whom your poet wrote this. And where does the muse come into the scheme of things? Recipient?
    ..

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    1. The narrator here is a lady, perhaps she is destined to be "his" muse :-)

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  9. Wonderful song. Beautiful rhyme. Love this piece.

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  10. So often longer poems don't draw me to the end. This one did. Such good cadance and feelings through the end.

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    1. So nice of you ... thanks for such beautiful words :-)

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  11. What a poem!!! Loved the word choices and the amazing image that accompanies it! Well done!

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