Thursday, November 22, 2012

Princess Of The Sea



Princess of the sea
Whispering seductively
We walk hand in hand.

We walk hand in hand
Across honey - laden beach
Her breath tingling mine.

Her breath tingling mine
Passionate waves dance in rhythm
Fire burns within.

Fire burns within
Miracle performed on beach
Love crosses borders.

Love crosses borders
I unwrap her mystic veil
Princess of the sea.


I am pretty excited to announce that this is my 100th Haiku. Wow, what an amazing journey it has been. I am really thankful to all my blogger friends from whom I have learnt this beautiful art. Thank you everyone for guiding me in my blogging journey. I hope this association between us goes on forever :-)

And as always, Love Your Life and Live Your Life :-)



This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Beach.





44 comments:

  1. You are going to set us on fire with such passionate poetry. ;D

    Congratulations!!!
    Hundred down, thousands more to go. (>‿◠)✌

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  2. Awesome Green Speck ... your 100th haiku and what a nice cascading haiku you have written here ... really a beautiful story told in haiku. Thank you for sharing these with Carpe Diem and thank you for participating every day again. Keep on going ... on to the next 100 haiku heh.

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  3. Many congratulations! I wish your journey continues and keeps enriching us with your rich imagery and wordcraft. Beautiful Haiku!

    I also want to thank you for introducing me to the world of Haiku!

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    1. Thanks a lot Meenakshi ... It's my pleasure :-)

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  4. 100? Congrats! I look forward to more of your wonderful work :)

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  5. Congratulations! And what a beauty #100 is! So romantic- I love the unwrapping of her mystic veil! Well done.

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  6. Wow! Congrats Greeny :D This was pretty nice & you have evolved so nicely. Proud of you buddy :) Take care! Keep writing such blissful haiku's :)

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    1. Thank You Tanya ... your encouragement played a big part :-)

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  7. Congratulations!! I must say you 100th Haiku is a very good read as usual. I like the enticing image of the Princess of the Sea. Like to see more and more haiku from your corner :)

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  8. You have a way of making your word sing. Very well done as always!

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  9. Lovely Haiku written in enfolded envelopes so reading them is like surfing the waves to a closer and closer connection. POWerful way to meet, greet, marry or to live, for example. Happy day!

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  10. Congratulations..I loved the repetition..it reads well either separately or as a whole..I think it rolls like a wave from verse to verse it has more mystery like the princess herself perhaps..

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  11. Congratulations & may you write many more :)

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  12. Congratulations Amrit, on you 100th haiku!! I could have swore you've done more.. it seems as if you've been doing this for years.. here's to a thousand more!! You heard me!! A thousand!!! :) This was very beautiful... it reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's Annabelle Lee.. You should read it if you haven't already.. this was just as stunning...

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    1. I have read Annabelle Lee, and it is awesome, a great piece of work. There is so much to learn from these great poets. I feel really elated that my poem reminds you of the great masterpiece. Thanks so much Crystal for always being so supportive :-)

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  13. I can imagine how beautiful the princess is, and it is only because of you. Lovely. Congrats for the Century ;)

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    1. Thank You Dark Angel for your everlasting encouragement :-)

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  14. Wow! That's great GS! Congrats! It sure is a wonderful journey and you did it in style. Very prolific writer with a very good command of the poetic language. Learning a lot from you too!

    Hank
    P/S Apologies for not commenting lately. Some connection issues which is now behind me. Thanks for your comments during all that time.

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    1. Thanks so much Hank ... Your appreciations really drive me to keep trying new stuffs :-)

      Net problems are really a nuisance. I'm happy you have got rid of it now. I love visiting your blog :-)

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  15. Whoa... amazing one as always...you never cease to surprise your reader :)
    Congrats...may you write more limericks and more poems and even more haiku :D

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  16. Wow, what a passionate cascade haiku. And continue to write many more.

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  17. This cascading haiku is really beautiful, so romantic and heart felt,,makes one swoon :-) Congrats on your 100th that is a wonderful start and I know we will see many, many more of your diverse and special writings.

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  18. Congrats on the century. Very poetic lines indeed.

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  19. That was a miracle... loved the way you ended... Good one!!

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  20. Great going, speck. Hearty congratulations...:)

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  21. Genius, Amrit! I wanna give a shout-out... Wooohooooooooo!! You did it and I hope you continue to surprise yourself and others. Great achievement! And a lovely poem! :)

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    1. Thanks so much Vaishali ... Your constant motivation has played a big part :-)

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    1. Thank You Sara :-) I am glad you liked this piece :-)

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