Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Amuse - Excite - Sincere




Amuse, Excite, Sincere,
Prompts for Today,
Nothing could be better,
Than Three Word Wednesday.

A lovely challenge,
Playing with the mind,
Words re-arrange,
Give a meaning to their kind.

My heart all dull,
After a hard day's work,
Careful my vacant skull,
Stay sincere, be perk.

Compose a song,
Amuse them all,
Just don't be wrong,
Rise after the fall.

Excite the lovers,
Hidden in the bay,
Delve deeper in their covers,
Let them have their way.

Nothing dawns on me,
Phrases elude the brain,
Time for me to flee,
'Cause I gotta catch the train.


This Poem is shared with Three Word Wednesday and the Words are Amuse, Excite, Sincere.



41 comments:

  1. Jolly amusing poem. It was exciting to see you use the prompts so well - I mean that sincerely.

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  2. Hey man, don't be late for your train! While commuting, maybe you could write some more good stuff...like another three words--it looks like fun.
    Thank you for visiting and comment!
    PEACE!

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    1. Thanks a lot Steve :-) The train of thoughts is always running though !!!

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  3. Rise after the fall, yes indeed!

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  4. Ah! Excellent and fun poem ~ You have a wonderful way with words ~ (A Creative Harbor)

    thanks for coming by ^_^

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  5. I hope it lifted your heart to write..it made me :) ...Jae

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  6. ah this is so creative and you made me smile and write too....

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  7. you are really good... :)
    it inspire me.

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  8. This entire piece makes me smile.

    The train, always a train to rush the day :)!

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  9. Delightful, love it !! :-)

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  10. haha, it sounded like the 1000 miles song!

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    1. sorry I meant 500 miles http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VLeyCX3Em-c

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    2. Ha ha ... i will check the song for sure :-)

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  11. You made it sound like hard work coming home, working all night on the piece then have to catch the train in the morning. However the amusing poem is a delight; just don't nod off at work.

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    1. I will take care not to nod off at work :-) Thanks Oldegg :-)

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  12. playful and fun. Great use of 3www

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  13. Nice weaving of words....I hate it when words elude me but there is nothing like a deadline to pull and push it out ~

    Happy day to you ~

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  14. Your words capture what is marvelous about memes and just plain being here.

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  15. simply great....

    http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

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  16. I agree there is something about playing with those words--rearranging and toying with them until the spill magic. you spun them well.

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