Monday, July 07, 2014

Rhythm Of Glasses

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rhythm of glasses
laughter and dance sweep the night
party in full swing


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64 comments:

  1. The first thought that "Party" brought in my mind was cocktails and dances...
    But, I didnt know how to take it forward...
    I see that you have done it brilliantly!

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    1. Ah, I wish I could have written that love haiku that you wrote ... it was too sweet :-)

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  2. Party!! the disco lights are really a rythm of glass so true!! really nice haiku!!

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  3. cool opening line...its fresh
    but still conveys the party feel

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  4. I can hearing the clinking of the glasses and the beats of music. Lively party.

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  5. Yes, one can hear the sounds.. Amrit.. Musical..well done..

    Well, I too have a story to tell.. a different take on the party...here:

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/07/a-helpless-moon-haiku.html

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  6. Dance and... clink, clink, clink.

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  7. One day, I hope to learn from you how to spin such eloquence with so few words!

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    1. You flatter me ... you are a mistress of words Divya :-)

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  8. Nice.That rhythm echoes in my mind.

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  9. Awesome haiku!! So much said in so few words!

    Stacy Lynn mar
    warningthestars.blogspot.com

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  10. "rhythm of glasses" - Well penned!

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  11. Sounds good.Where's my invitation?

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    1. You don't need an invitation my friend ... you are always welcome :-)

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  12. yes ! a real party ! wonderful !

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  13. Love that phrase 'rhythm of glasses'...nice entry.

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  14. I agree with jazzytower -- the "rhythm of glasses" is a wonderful way to open the poem. :)

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  15. Oh yes! I can almost hear the tinkle of those glasses!

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  16. now who could have thought of such a rhythm :)

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  17. Quite some party this one!

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  18. Wish I was there! Sounds like a good time!!
    ..

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  19. Invite me next time. Good one.

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  20. Love the idea of laughter and dance sweeping the night! Would love to go to a party like that! ♥

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  21. Nice one. Makes me want to go to a party!

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  22. If I'm asleep, I get rather grumpy being awakened by a party in full swing! ;)

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    1. Ha ha ha ... better shut the music then :p

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