Sunday, May 18, 2014

Songs Of Barren Love

o' dear summer
will you melt this bleeding snow
songs of barren love

songs of barren love
lost in your silent gazes
trust and faith misplaced

trust and faith misplaced
yet, a faint drop of hope blooms
amidst shadows dark

amidst shadows dark
lost affections guide us through
to togetherness



This Haiku is shared with Haiku My Heart - Soul Humming.



34 comments:

  1. .....To bliss and to everlasting happiness

    Serene and soulful composition Amrit.

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  2. ''lost affections guide us through
    to togetherness''

    I didn't get this...
    How lost affection can guide of togetherness?

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    1. Affections may have got lost but not the memories ... perhaps, some day those memories may reflect on the future, brighter and happier :-)

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  3. *sigh* I'm yet to recover from the awesomeness of this poem to say anything at all.

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    1. And that says a lot .... thank you sooooooooooo much :-D

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  4. As long as we have a faint drop of hope, we will be all right--sooner or later.

    HMH: Perhaps the Tortoise

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  5. Aaaaaaghhhhh!!! This is beautiful!! I just love it!!!

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  6. "trust and faith misplaced
    yet, a faint drop of hope blooms
    amidst shadows dark"

    STORY OF MY LIFE.

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  7. Poetry, fiction, haiku, limerick, songs. Is there something you cannot write?

    Jealousy just multiplied! :P

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    1. Yes...I wish I could write these with the power punch that your writings carry. Am jealous too :-/

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  8. The first verse made me imagine Orloaf singing some song...slowly it got deep and very thoughtful...lovely poem..:)

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  9. I love that third stanza - "a faint drop of hope blooms"...we always gotta keep our eye on that faint drop :)

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  10. Beautiful versification,Amrit. All the four-one better than the other.

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  11. Loved the subtle presence of hope Amrit,.spring is here and it will surely bring blossoms of love :)

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  12. Love this...especially the idea of summer melting all the bleeding snow. We had entirely too much snow last winter and I am glad to see it gone! ♥

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  13. very deep and thoughtful
    i liked the gentle sadness it is imbued with

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