(Image Source: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/04/29/photo-challenge-6-the-moon-garden/)
pluck stars
and a few kisses
in hazel blushes
in breathing branches
in softening wishes
of tides rising
and falling
embracing sweet notes
of clandestine plays
no act
nor a story
to react
love
finds solace
in promises
as hands clasped tight
in moments
wrong and right
and the Moon Garden witnesses
those silent pleas
of dreams woven
in hushed murmurs
as we whisper tales
incomplete, and then descends the dawn
silently, we walk our separate ways
awaiting another rendezous of bliss and smiles
soon after this breaking morn
This Poem is shared with
- MindLoveMisery's Menagerie - Photo Challenge #6 "The Moon Garden",
- Imaginary Garden - Open Link Monday,
- Poets United - Poetry Pantry #199.
Amrit, this poem needs to be published. Seriously :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteThis is.....Beautiful!! <3
ReplyDelete''love finds solace
in promises''
So true:)
I agree to Optimistic, Emerald :)
Thank You Simmy :-)
DeleteAn ode to the romantic dreamer, loved it Amrit!! Silent pleas of dreams, solace in promises, you my friend surely weave magic :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
Delete... hands clasped in moments wrong and right ... omg, you where there?
ReplyDeletePerhaps I was ;-)
DeleteThis is absolutely breath-taking love it =)
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteAhh! So beautiful and so romantic! Magic this is...
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
DeleteOh wow! There were parts that were pretty and others that were thrilling. I so loved the first stanza...the words are so...perfect. They convey so much imagery, emotion and leave much to the imagination, and they trip so pleasingly off the tongue.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad I stopped by. This was a treat! :)
Risa
Thank You Risa :-)
DeleteWow, great poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteA sad romantic wonder!
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
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