"Fawad I'm. What's your name ma'am?"
Though blessed with conventionally good looks, all his attempts to flirt failed to cook.
He thought he rhymed well; but, his words could never sell.
"Don't worry, why hurry? Today you refuse, tomorrow you will be sorry."
He set to write a better song, verses that would woo without going wrong.
"Fawad means heart, I promise not to part. Girl, let's just start. Why you still playing dart?"
He kept failing, ailing, but still, he didn't stop rhyming.
"Your eyes blue, let's kiss like glue. Why not baby? I don't have a clue."
This 99 word fiction is shared with Blogging from A to Z April Challenge - F.
Girl :
ReplyDeleteOh! Fawad please don't rhyme,
There is considerable waiting time,
Since you are in a queue,
Either you stick or rue.
Ha ha ha ... poor Fawad :-p
DeleteI can relate to the subject. Not sure if that's a positive thing...
ReplyDeleteThere sure is positivism in everything :p
DeleteAwesome. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd not to mention Deaf Mamma's also sounded great. :D
Yeah ... she gave a fitting reply to Fawad :p
Deleteha..ha :) Nice name ....
ReplyDeleteWith those rhymes, girls ought to run away :P
ReplyDeleteFawad tries his best though :-p
DeleteFawad should do what I've been trying to do for a whole lifetime.
ReplyDeleteSHUT UP AND LISTEN.
I wonder Amrit--was it difficult to construct those poorly writtn rhymes?--grin!
Steve, as you know by now, I am a master of poorly written poems, so they didn't seem so difficult to me :-p
DeleteHa ha...
ReplyDeleteCrazy write-up it is!
Yes it is :-p
Deletehahahahahah...Kiss like glue..hahahahahahha
ReplyDeleteYes, a bond that sticks :p
DeleteFunny! I love it. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Balqis :-)
DeletePerhaps he is trying to hard...rather than just letting it be :)
ReplyDeleteYes ... he needs a good teacher :-P
DeleteNice to connect and follow http://aimingforapublishingdeal.blogspot.co.uk/
ReplyDeleteThanks Comley :-)
Deletekiss like glue? Ewww!! No wonder girls run away from him...
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
Deletecute :) ... have a feeling he'll be alright ... :)
ReplyDeleteYes, he will be :-)
DeleteNo No NO! Fawad is a beautiful name! this shall be ingrained in memory!
ReplyDeleteHilarious! I adore Deaf Mama's comment above-- such a fitting reply to Fawad :)
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Ha ha ... thanks Damyanti :-)
Deletegood creativity ..
ReplyDeleteLolz, Funny !
ReplyDeleteWhy not baby? Ask Abu Azmi :P
ReplyDeleteNice one :D
Ha ha :D
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