his fingers count
days left to return home
a wait so sweet
a wait so sweet
a wait so sweet
tunes of songs familiar
rains upon him
rains upon him
minutes, hours pass, teasingly
his fingers count
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Clever *grins* :D
ReplyDeleteExactly how i felt during each exam, counting down days for vacation and home :) Loved it Amrit
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteThanks Jyotsna :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ayala :-)
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet one this. The anticipation is amplified by the imagery of someone counting days in fingers. Beautiful. I could see a tried army man waiting to get back home.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajesh :-)
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ReplyDeleteNice post, i hope everyone will like your post..
Thank You :-)
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ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this wonderful post, It is awesome.
Thanks :-)
DeleteHome sweet home. Nicely done!
ReplyDeletenice work Amrit ! reminds me of those times in hostels ...!
ReplyDeleteahhhh Amrit, there is nothing like home
ReplyDeleteWise thoughts.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
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