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trapped by zombies
I would love comedies
last wish you say
gonna be my way
'cause they could bite
and I would fight
till breaths run last
and time flies fast
one, two, three and five
forget the count, I gotta strive
run, run, run, jump and run
chase is on, let's have some fun
I would live to tell this tale
and then name it - 'Escape From Hell'
mountains high and oceans shall I scale
until am safe, and all is well
Zombies are my favorite :)
ReplyDeleteFirst time read a poem about them :D
Out of the box indeed
Thanks Anirudh :-)
Deletewould live to tell this tale
ReplyDeleteand then name it - 'Escape From Hell'... yes, good name for sure.
Thank You George :-)
DeleteNever "got into" zombies. As a child, forced to walk one mile up a mountain road through woods, on dark nights, EVERY TREE was a "zombie". To this day, thinking of such creatures gives me chills. So...for me also, ESCAPE FROM HELL is appropriate title, Amrit. And I, too, run, run, run, up the hill, carrying books and violin...
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... would love to run with you Steve :D
DeleteI imagined SAIF ALI KHAN shouting these lines out loud in GO GOA GONE.
ReplyDeleteESCAPE FROM HELL indeed!
Thank You Red :-D
DeleteI hate it when google eats up my comments! This was so Walking Dead Theme track types :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Vaisakhi :-)
DeleteVery bold! I wish you the best in your escape. :-D
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Thank You Gretyll :-)
Deletelovely! I can easily imagine a nice English song based on this poem! it is perfect for lyrics!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :-)
DeleteAnd that was so rap worthy....loved it
ReplyDeleteThank You DG :-)
DeleteI love this! Every word ...
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen :-)
DeleteHiya and sorry for a late visit. I like what you did here with the challenge. The sing song rhyme creates another eery element of its own. Thanks for posting to the out of standard
ReplyDeleteThank You Isadora :-)
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