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There were three of us - Jack, Selena and me. I didn't like the way Jack and Selena held each other, whenever we met outside the cafe. It burnt me from within.
I bought a revolver.
The next day's Daily featured the sensational murder of Jack.
"I love you Selena, so I had to kill Jack. Be mine please," I confessed to her.
She looked at me in horror, and started to scream. I realized I was running short of options. Two shots reverberated in the room.
The next day's Daily featured the sensational deaths of Selena and me, Juliet.
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ohh! homo angle! nice and a very interesting take! last line is a sixerrrr! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :-)
DeleteOooh very, VERY nicely done!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteSensational....few words speak so much! nice one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shweta :-)
Deletewow! lots of suspense and intrigue in few words...well done!
ReplyDeleteThank You Cheryl :-)
DeleteWow...powerful!! Tragic...
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteThe last twist takes the cake, Amrit :) Loved that twist. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThank You Vinay :-)
DeleteExcellent twist! Loved your ending.
ReplyDeleteLol Juliet is always the fool :P Nice end! :D
ReplyDeleteThank You Vaisakhi :-)
DeleteWow 2 homicides and a suicide in 100 words with a last word twist ! Bravo !!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteO! A beautiful twist.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sarala :-)
DeleteOh my goodness! A triangle. Very exciting!
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Thanks Lily :-)
DeleteVery nice. 100 words of packed emotion!
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