Lovely :)
Thanks Cynthia :-)
Nice one! :) Treasure your treasure and guard it with your life..... Somebody needs to tell her that ;)
Very well said :-)
Wow...Did any book inspire you to read this?
Thanks You Satya ... just thought of this ... not inspired by any book :-)
The matter of fact in three lines.Nice.
Aaargh...that's unfair!! Lovely haiku..Amrit!
Creepy yet sweet.. :P
Thanks Mirage :-)
No written words can remain secret :)
You make me smile. Nicely written! :)
Thank You Balqis :-)
And that is why I do not write diaries anymore...loved your haiku
Thanks DG :-)
i'm back with the golden light and one crimson leaf falling. please come back too!
what a dark Haiku! the last line is a sixer!!
It's kinda creepy ..but I like! :)
Thank You Pooja :-)
Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Cynthia :-)
DeleteNice one! :) Treasure your treasure and guard it with your life..... Somebody needs to tell her that ;)
ReplyDeleteVery well said :-)
DeleteWow...
ReplyDeleteDid any book inspire you to read this?
Thanks You Satya ... just thought of this ... not inspired by any book :-)
DeleteThe matter of fact in three lines.Nice.
ReplyDeleteAaargh...that's unfair!!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku..Amrit!
Creepy yet sweet.. :P
ReplyDeleteThanks Mirage :-)
DeleteNo written words can remain secret :)
ReplyDeleteYou make me smile. Nicely written! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Balqis :-)
DeleteAnd that is why I do not write diaries anymore...loved your haiku
ReplyDeleteThanks DG :-)
Deletei'm back with the golden light and one crimson leaf falling. please come back too!
ReplyDeletewhat a dark Haiku! the last line is a sixer!!
ReplyDeleteIt's kinda creepy ..but I like! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Pooja :-)
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