that is really so piquant and very stirring! loved it ! I just loveee your verses! keep writing :)
Sometimes that single missing hug made all the difference...
Yes it does :-)
simple but strong poem with a great message for all relationships. good one :)
A hug and a smile and perhaps an apology would have changed things ~ Good one Amrit ~
I agree...an apology is always a good idea !
Thanks Grace and Rallentanda :-)
touch is an important aspect of relationships...a hug...a welcome smile...might have indeed made the difference....
Yes it would have :-)
Yes. A hug can make all the difference...
It does :-)
Groovy piece- without that hug what was there?
That's the point :-)
Oh. Sad.
Time waits for no one, and that's how it is ... Love, cat.
Yes, that is Time :-)
LOVELY IT IS AMRIT :)
Thanks Vinisha :-)
ah....the what if's and the had you's! :)
:-)
Oh wow the last two lines!! You are amazing my friend! :)
Thanks Soumya :-)
5th and 6th line says it all Amrit.Good one.
Thank You Satya :-)
wonderful write.i get the nostalgic feeling of missing someone, of unspent time stolen.
Thanks Stacy :-)
I hate missed opportunities but I do like how you wrote this - brief but powerful. Well done.
Thank You Justin :-)
So true!
in such simple words such strong feelings..:))
Thank You Adhi :-)
Love in very lovely lines Very nice,Amrit.
Yearning, in just a few lines. This connects to all.
Thank You Kim :-)
Oh my. Worth a thought though.
Thanks Lubaina :-)
wow its working...http://www.vashikaranprediction.com/vashikaran-mantra-for-love.html
that is really so piquant and very stirring! loved it ! I just loveee your verses! keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteSometimes that single missing hug made all the difference...
ReplyDeleteYes it does :-)
Deletesimple but strong poem with a great message for all relationships. good one :)
ReplyDeleteA hug and a smile and perhaps an apology would have changed things ~ Good one Amrit ~
ReplyDeleteI agree...an apology is always a good idea !
DeleteThanks Grace and Rallentanda :-)
Deletetouch is an important aspect of relationships...a hug...a welcome smile...might have indeed made the difference....
ReplyDeleteYes it would have :-)
DeleteYes. A hug can make all the difference...
ReplyDeleteIt does :-)
DeleteGroovy piece- without that hug what was there?
ReplyDeleteThat's the point :-)
DeleteOh. Sad.
ReplyDeleteTime waits for no one, and that's how it is ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteYes, that is Time :-)
DeleteLOVELY IT IS AMRIT :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinisha :-)
Deleteah....the what if's and the had you's! :)
ReplyDelete:-)
DeleteOh wow the last two lines!! You are amazing my friend! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Soumya :-)
Delete5th and 6th line says it all Amrit.
ReplyDeleteGood one.
Thank You Satya :-)
Deletewonderful write.
ReplyDeletei get the nostalgic feeling of missing someone, of unspent time stolen.
Thanks Stacy :-)
DeleteI hate missed opportunities but I do like how you wrote this - brief but powerful. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank You Justin :-)
DeleteSo true!
ReplyDeletein such simple words such strong feelings..:))
ReplyDeleteThank You Adhi :-)
DeleteLove in very lovely lines Very nice,Amrit.
ReplyDeleteYearning, in just a few lines. This connects to all.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kim :-)
DeleteOh my. Worth a thought though.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lubaina :-)
Deletewow its working...
ReplyDeletehttp://www.vashikaranprediction.com/vashikaran-mantra-for-love.html