Hmm.... this makes the reader pause, doesn't it? The sparrow sees all .... without being noticed ....
Nicely done!
Thank You Janice :-)
nice little and cute haiku!sparrow as a spy..so sweeettt! :D
Thanks Ankita :-)
That made me laugh! He is a bit more obvious than a fly on the wall, :)-
Still, no one pays much attention to sparrows...In the Castle Keep
Well said :D
Sparrow Spy intriguing concept
I always thought of becoming a sparrow in my next birth, don't know whom will I spy on :)
Happy spying :-p
sparrows are better than drones
Absolutely! Sparrows are harmless, drones...not so much...Castle Tree
Very true.
Intriguing. Good take.
Thank You :-)
Thanks Red :-)
Sparrow spying good imagination :-)
Thanks Bhawana :-)
one would be noisy the other silent. It is a fine haiku.How are you Amrit?Big hugs to you!
I am doing great Leslie ... a big hug to you too :-)
Hmm.... this makes the reader pause, doesn't it? The sparrow sees all .... without being noticed ....
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank You Janice :-)
Deletenice little and cute haiku!
ReplyDeletesparrow as a spy..so sweeettt! :D
Thanks Ankita :-)
DeleteThat made me laugh! He is a bit more obvious than a fly on the wall, :)-
ReplyDeleteStill, no one pays much attention to sparrows...
DeleteIn the Castle Keep
Well said :D
DeleteSparrow Spy intriguing concept
ReplyDeleteI always thought of becoming a sparrow in my next birth, don't know whom will I spy on :)
ReplyDeleteHappy spying :-p
Deletesparrows are better than drones
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely! Sparrows are harmless, drones...not so much...
DeleteCastle Tree
Very true.
DeleteIntriguing. Good take.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteThanks Red :-)
ReplyDeleteSparrow spying good imagination :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Bhawana :-)
Deleteone would be noisy the other silent. It is a fine haiku.
ReplyDeleteHow are you Amrit?
Big hugs to you!
I am doing great Leslie ... a big hug to you too :-)
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