lovely! some times it becomes so necessary to let go of past!Happy Diwali!!
Happy Diwali Ankita :-)
Lost stories within the paper boat -- very appealing! :)And the bearer is free --
True :-)
Ah! Finally...This requires lots of courage.Good one!
Trying to forget her past? good one.
How cathartic is must have felt for her to release that boat...
Thanks Keith :-)
O, love this poem ... is right up my alley ... as I delete my poems come New Year ... Love, c.
... and poems are like paper boats ... :)
Some poems are like the Titanic but meet the same fate as the paper boats!
Paper boat or Titanic ... both sank :-(
All those lost stories! I felt a lot of emotion reading this lovely poem.
Thank You :-)
Fragile, yet bravely starting on her writing journey after letting go of her fears. I love it! Well done!
Thanks a lot :-)
I enjoyed the narrative flow of this poem.PS Please leave off the anti-robot words. They are difficult to read and navigate.
Thanks Alice ... by the way, I do not have anti-robot words enabled.
It's always nice reading your Haiku. Well written! :)
Thank You Balqis :-)
Thanks :-)
lovely! some times it becomes so necessary to let go of past!
ReplyDeleteHappy Diwali!!
Happy Diwali Ankita :-)
DeleteLost stories within the paper boat -- very appealing! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd the bearer is free --
True :-)
DeleteAh! Finally...
ReplyDeleteThis requires lots of courage.
Good one!
Trying to forget her past? good one.
ReplyDeleteHow cathartic is must have felt for her to release that boat...
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteO, love this poem ... is right up my alley ... as I delete my poems come New Year ... Love, c.
ReplyDelete... and poems are like paper boats ... :)
DeleteSome poems are like the Titanic but meet the same fate as the paper boats!
DeletePaper boat or Titanic ... both sank :-(
DeleteAll those lost stories! I felt a lot of emotion reading this lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteFragile, yet bravely starting on her writing journey after letting go of her fears. I love it! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteI enjoyed the narrative flow of this poem.
ReplyDeletePS Please leave off the anti-robot words. They are difficult to read and navigate.
Thanks Alice ... by the way, I do not have anti-robot words enabled.
DeleteIt's always nice reading your Haiku. Well written! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Balqis :-)
DeleteThanks :-)
ReplyDelete