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I shall sing to the moon
hum a tune
or perhaps collect the marbles
scattered along my childhood
when I am alone
and have some free time
I would play that rhyme
that resonates deep
like the balmy waves
ahead they leap
kissing the shores
where I now lay
penning my thoughts
they dance and sway
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nice rhythm in this amrit...
ReplyDeleteto that rhythm within us we must be true...
Thanks Brian :-)
DeleteDancing words, rhythmically divine! Catches our attention, and ultimately, our eyes and at last they can see what brilliance lies in the corner of Amrits mind! Marvelous Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Crystal :D
DeleteAnd the moon calls back
ReplyDeletein a whisper kind of way
reminded of the marbles
and the games people play
a fine verse Amrit - I hope you are well and lapping up the warmth of inspiration in 2015
Thanks Moonie ... loved your lines :-)
DeleteThere is something special dancing with the moon like that... wonderful
ReplyDeleteThank You Bjorn :-)
DeleteI think there is something comparable between singing a tune and penning one's thoughts....in that both are ways of expressing creativity!
ReplyDeleteYes, creativity is always linked :-)
DeleteI love "I shall sing to the moon".....a neat rhythm to this poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry :-)
DeleteFeel like dancing ... no ... swaying ... maybe belly dancing? ... no, fire hooping to this poem ... hey, that gives me an idea ... thank you for the inspiration, Mr. G ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteThank You Cat :-)
DeleteEverytime I come back to the blogging world, you are definitely one of the bloggers I catch up with. This is why :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Wanderer :-)
DeleteLovely thoughts, relaxing and peaceful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Michael :-)
Delete'collect the marbles of my childhood' , such lovely imagery
ReplyDeleteThanks Suyash :-)
DeleteNice mood lazing on the shore writing to the waves
ReplyDelete... just being. There is a sweet art in doing nothing :)
Well said Cressida :-)
Deleteone deep poem this is! i loved these lines the most- 'or perhaps collect the marbles
ReplyDeletescattered along my childhood' awesome :)
Thanks Ankita :-)
Delete"penning my thoughts
ReplyDeletethey dance and sway" - beautiful. :)
I hope it comes soon :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary :-)
DeleteHaha! Marbles of past light as fish in waves! How delightful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Susan :-)
DeleteBeautiful things to do in one's free time :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteWhen you are alone and have some free time..You could call and meet me for a coffee and a chat :)
ReplyDeleteSure ... next time :D
DeleteI'd love to sing as well to the moon... and i'll tell you a secret.. i am in a relationship with her... smiles... love the things you do in your free time...
ReplyDelete- ksm
Thanks a lot :-)
DeleteI love the connection between singing a song and penning your thoughts. Lovely imagery in your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You Gabriella :-)
DeleteBeautifully penned...loved the flow of words..
ReplyDeleteThanks DG :-)
DeleteBeautifully expressed Amrit! As always:)))
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Thank You Sonal :-)
DeleteYour words are magic.
ReplyDeleteVery soothing!
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteThere is something special about that silvery fleece. Perhaps, the moon and I are connected.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned, Amrit. :)
Thanks Yashi :-)
DeleteRhythmatic and smooth.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
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