Good one :)
Thanks Anmol :-)
Sounds Great.. :)
Thank You Rahul :-)
Splendid!
Thanks Usha Ji :-)
The first thought that "Party" brought in my mind was cocktails and dances...But, I didnt know how to take it forward...I see that you have done it brilliantly!
Ah, I wish I could have written that love haiku that you wrote ... it was too sweet :-)
Party!! the disco lights are really a rythm of glass so true!! really nice haiku!!
Thanks Arushi :-)
cool opening line...its freshbut still conveys the party feel
Thank You Brian :-)
I can hearing the clinking of the glasses and the beats of music. Lively party.
Thanks so much :-)
Yes, one can hear the sounds.. Amrit.. Musical..well done..Well, I too have a story to tell.. a different take on the party...here:http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/07/a-helpless-moon-haiku.html
Thank You Ramesh Sir :-)
Dance and... clink, clink, clink.
Thanks Magaly :-)
One day, I hope to learn from you how to spin such eloquence with so few words!
You flatter me ... you are a mistress of words Divya :-)
Where's the restroom?
Somewhere down the corner :D
Nice.That rhythm echoes in my mind.
Great take!
Thanks Celestine :-)
njoy :)
Thank You Sumana :-)
Awesome haiku!! So much said in so few words!Stacy Lynn marwarningthestars.blogspot.com
Thanks Stacy :-)
"rhythm of glasses" - Well penned!
Thank You Enigma :-)
I can hear it!
Thanks Sherry :-)
Sounds good.Where's my invitation?
You don't need an invitation my friend ... you are always welcome :-)
yes ! a real party ! wonderful !
Love that phrase 'rhythm of glasses'...nice entry.
I agree with jazzytower -- the "rhythm of glasses" is a wonderful way to open the poem. :)
Thank you for such kind words :-)
Oh yes! I can almost hear the tinkle of those glasses!
I am glad :-)
now who could have thought of such a rhythm :)
Thanks Red :-)
nice take! :)
Thank You Ankita :-)
Quite some party this one!
Thanks Soumya :-)
enjoyed! :)
Thank You Payal :-)
Wish I was there! Sounds like a good time!!..
Thanks Jim :-)
Invite me next time. Good one.
Sure. You are in :-)
Love the idea of laughter and dance sweeping the night! Would love to go to a party like that! ♥
Nice one. Makes me want to go to a party!
Thank You so much :-)
… made me smile.
If I'm asleep, I get rather grumpy being awakened by a party in full swing! ;)
Ha ha ha ... better shut the music then :p
Good one :)
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DeleteSounds Great.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Rahul :-)
DeleteSplendid!
ReplyDeleteThanks Usha Ji :-)
DeleteThe first thought that "Party" brought in my mind was cocktails and dances...
ReplyDeleteBut, I didnt know how to take it forward...
I see that you have done it brilliantly!
Ah, I wish I could have written that love haiku that you wrote ... it was too sweet :-)
DeleteParty!! the disco lights are really a rythm of glass so true!! really nice haiku!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Arushi :-)
Deletecool opening line...its fresh
ReplyDeletebut still conveys the party feel
Thank You Brian :-)
DeleteI can hearing the clinking of the glasses and the beats of music. Lively party.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteYes, one can hear the sounds.. Amrit.. Musical..well done..
ReplyDeleteWell, I too have a story to tell.. a different take on the party...here:
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/07/a-helpless-moon-haiku.html
Thank You Ramesh Sir :-)
DeleteDance and... clink, clink, clink.
ReplyDeleteThanks Magaly :-)
DeleteOne day, I hope to learn from you how to spin such eloquence with so few words!
ReplyDeleteYou flatter me ... you are a mistress of words Divya :-)
DeleteWhere's the restroom?
ReplyDeleteSomewhere down the corner :D
DeleteNice.That rhythm echoes in my mind.
ReplyDeleteGreat take!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
Deletenjoy :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sumana :-)
DeleteAwesome haiku!! So much said in so few words!
ReplyDeleteStacy Lynn mar
warningthestars.blogspot.com
Thanks Stacy :-)
Delete"rhythm of glasses" - Well penned!
ReplyDeleteThank You Enigma :-)
DeleteI can hear it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry :-)
DeleteSounds good.Where's my invitation?
ReplyDeleteYou don't need an invitation my friend ... you are always welcome :-)
Deleteyes ! a real party ! wonderful !
ReplyDeleteLove that phrase 'rhythm of glasses'...nice entry.
ReplyDeleteI agree with jazzytower -- the "rhythm of glasses" is a wonderful way to open the poem. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for such kind words :-)
DeleteOh yes! I can almost hear the tinkle of those glasses!
ReplyDeleteI am glad :-)
Deletenow who could have thought of such a rhythm :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Red :-)
Deletenice take!
ReplyDelete:)
Thank You Ankita :-)
DeleteQuite some party this one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Soumya :-)
Deleteenjoyed! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Payal :-)
DeleteWish I was there! Sounds like a good time!!
ReplyDelete..
Thanks Jim :-)
DeleteInvite me next time. Good one.
ReplyDeleteSure. You are in :-)
DeleteLove the idea of laughter and dance sweeping the night! Would love to go to a party like that! ♥
ReplyDeleteNice one. Makes me want to go to a party!
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :-)
Delete… made me smile.
ReplyDeleteI am glad :-)
DeleteIf I'm asleep, I get rather grumpy being awakened by a party in full swing! ;)
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha ... better shut the music then :p
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