Monday, July 21, 2014

A Few Rays Of Love

a few rays of love
drench this war infested land
I shall be content


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  1. Unknown7/21/2014 11:42:00 am

    So brilliant.

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  2. Sri Valli7/21/2014 12:05:00 pm

    Love can change everything! Beautiful haiku :)

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  3. kalpana solsi7/21/2014 12:25:00 pm

    The sun had to shine very brightly. Fire of war is spreading rapidly. Love and peace have to reign.

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  4. Red Handed7/21/2014 02:42:00 pm

    absolutely brilliant....

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  5. Anonymous7/21/2014 04:36:00 pm

    Nice haiku more peace would be very nice.

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  6. Reading Pleasure7/21/2014 09:03:00 pm

    Thank God for the rains.

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  7. rallentanda7/21/2014 10:11:00 pm

    A lot of bad things happening in the world at the moment.

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  8. Anonymous7/22/2014 01:29:00 am

    What a beautiful haiku filled with love and hope

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  9. Reshma7/22/2014 05:06:00 am

    That is such a lovely wish Amrit!

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  10. WabiSabi7/22/2014 06:21:00 am

    If only! Your sentiments are mine too!

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  11. jazzytower7/22/2014 07:42:00 am

    Oh! How truly appropriate for our times.

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  12. Magical Mystical Teacher7/23/2014 04:57:00 pm

    More than a few of those rays would be most welcome!

    Content to Gather Shadows

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  13. rebecca7/23/2014 08:10:00 pm

    yes, please!
    let's start right now and NEVER STOP!

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  14. Anonymous7/24/2014 01:27:00 am

    Yes, this would cause content...this haiku does fit nicely for both prompts.

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  15. Anonymous7/24/2014 08:34:00 am

    War is just like that. An infestation. Very nice line.

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  16. Anonymous7/24/2014 05:10:00 pm

    i like this one ! so poetic ,yet so realistic !

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