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your sole hits the soul
burnt and battered
bruised and tattered
the worn out edges
tell many a tale
of sighs and fears
that envelop the mansion
in brimming despair
will you walk those rugged steps
again, holding on to faith
and the desire to unscramble a happy note
or will you turn away in fury
hurt and dejected, eager to start afresh
'cause you know broken glasses mend
not two hearts, a faint trail scratching through your dreams
urging for a better tomorrow
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How can you write such wonderful stuff? So intense things so casually? Unbelievably amazing! Salute :)
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy :-)
DeleteI so love this work. An awesome piece :)
ReplyDeleteThank u thank u :-D
DeleteHOW BRILLIANT. You craft such beautiful lines...
ReplyDeleteYet again, you are my favourite!
It's a pleasure receiving such beautiful praises from one of the best bloggers I have come across :-)
DeleteI am floored by the first line , ýour sole hits the soul'. so intense. a pleasure reading your verses, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :-)
DeleteIn a word ~ awesome! ~ Eddie :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Eddie :-)
Deletebeautiful!! loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank You Divsi :-)
DeleteGreat work Amrit. I especially loved the sole/soul line.
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
Deleteif we do not start again, what have we left...not much of a life...
ReplyDeleteyes, i say we start afresh..def like the soul to sole line as well...
Thank You Brian :-)
DeleteOh wow, they do not rhyme but tug the heart! Mine only do the former. Sigh.
ReplyDeleteI wish I could rhyme like you :-(
Deletelovely and very poignant
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :-)
Deletevery intense and beautiful Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
DeleteWhat a thinking.... brilliant!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Noopur :-)
DeleteExcellent thoughts.
ReplyDeleteHolding on to faith is the hardest thing to do.
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Thanks Avy :-)
DeleteSimply beautifully put Amrit. only faith holds us together when the going gets tough.
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
DeleteAwesome piece of writing! So intense!! :)
ReplyDeleteYou are so awesome, Amrit! :)
ReplyDeleteI haven't been able to read some of my favourite blogs coz of work and I definitely missed reading yours!
Thank You Pooja :-)
DeleteInteresting picture.
ReplyDeletedid you hear about the breakfast prayer..
Take Care
Thanks Iremi :-)
DeleteToo beautiful! I'm speechless. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Balqis :-)
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