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you see that house of gold
right around the corner
as you turn east
into the horizontal landscape
notice how the dandelions crane their neck
to have a closer look
at what lies beyond
the brownish shades
a few hours later
these dandelions bloom
orbs of power
fertilized with gold dusts
they rise into the horizon
kissing the eastern skies
This Poem is shared with Magpie Tales - Mag 169.
An inspiration sort of , that made them bloom and kiss the sky...Brilliant take on the prompt..as always :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot buddy :-)
DeleteNicely expressed. I do like the idea of dandelions craning their necks! So true....they do.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteLovely, Nicely expressed
ReplyDeleteGorgeous love the way you use language!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteYou always have the most amazing takes on prompts my friend. This was no exception.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully related the Gold and dandelions charm :)
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy :-)
DeleteYour poem is lovely, one of my favorites this week!
ReplyDeleteThank You Helen :-) This means a lot to me !!!
DeleteLove the way you have described the dandelions...craning their necks and kissing the sky...marvelous GS!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteLove how you've taken sth so ordinary as a dandelion and given it power with your words!
ReplyDeleteThank You Momina :-)
DeleteReading your poem and then looking back at the picture, the dandelions do appear craning their necks for a closer look! It's always interesting the different details that strikes each observer.
ReplyDeleteThanks Robyn :-)
DeleteThis is a lovely take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThank You Belva :-)
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