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As the little heart pumped inside my soul, I knew things would be all right now, between me and him.
The doctor's voice reverberated against my eardrums, forcing me to smile each and every time I remembered his exact words, "Congratulations, you are expecting."
The doorbell rang and my anticipation touched the skies; he would surely propose marriage once I gave him the news, and then, we would start our own sweet little family, in my valley of dreams.
I hugged him excitedly and whispered "You are going to be Dad, Honey."
He shrugged, freed himself from my embrace, and chuckled, "Don't be crazy darling; this is just a damn accident."
This Five Sentence Micro - Fiction is shared with Five Sentence Fiction - Accident.
Accidents will happen.
ReplyDeleteYOU happened!
Hey...I happened.
Song:
We two are among a bunch
Of accidents...
SMILES!
Peace.
Ha ha :D
DeleteAccident! Could a man be so perverse?
ReplyDeleteThere are evil everywhere !!!
DeleteHeartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteYeah :-(
DeleteI think I will dump him like an accident ~ Well written GS ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :-)
Delete:) well written !!! Super Like !
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteAh, poor girl, I can feel her pain. Well written and heartfelt.
ReplyDeleteBarbara@
allmylivesnow.blogspot.com
Thanks Barbara :-)
DeleteSuch things happen quite often these days. Sad though!
ReplyDeleteIf only people could be more understanding and sensitive to feelings !!!
DeleteI am one ... my brothers are all dark, uni brow and all ... so are my parents ... I am as blond and "uni browless" as they come ... well I'm here ... might just as well continue living, I'd say :)
ReplyDeleteOf course, your spirit of life always inspires me to move against all obstacles my friend :-)
DeleteHis response says a lot about him and gives her all she needs to move on. A well written piece of a common experience.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lizzie :-)
DeleteAww, u had me there
ReplyDelete:-)
Deletewell written
ReplyDeleteThanks Ali :-)
DeleteOh my, that's heartbreaking...
ReplyDeleteOuch! Being so wrapped up in her dreamy world with her baby and be so shunned in every possible respect. I felt that one. Great write!
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