These are absolutely exquisite! Love!
Very nicely done
Love them both. I have traveled across a bridge or two in my time :)
Thank You Keith :-)
Love the idea of the lone traveler seeking....as he walks the bridge!
Loved the hide and seek - nicely done!
Thank You :-)
I really liked both ones
Thank You Ali :-)
this is exquisite... I feel more meanings underlying here ... about life... nice!
Thanks Sreeja :-)
Both Haiku have a charm of their own, the first one is more playful while the second is more philosophical...
I love this excellent piece!
Thanks McGuffy :-)
Charming and loved the first, with the little game that the sun and moon play!!
Thank You Nanka :-)
Both so very beautiful. Love ♥
nice one!!
simple sweet and beautiful...wish i could write haikus too..:(
And I wish I could write stories like you :-)
Both were great. I particularly like the second.
Thanks a lot :-)
1st one is soo unique!!!http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/05/bridging-hearts.html
Excellent...both superb ... the second speaks louder to me.PeaceSiggi
Thanks Siggi :-)
Each is wonderful but together they are complete. (even tho we are not suppose to write haiku as a "haiku poem"! - I always secretly look for the thread - don't tell anyone. . . )Really really nice haiku
Ha ha ... I won't tell your secret anyone, don't worry :-P
beautiful haiku! The time when both sun and moon are up in the sky is beautiful and the place you set up sounds perfect!
Thanks Sankara :-)
These are absolutely exquisite! Love!
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done
ReplyDeleteLove them both. I have traveled across a bridge or two in my time :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Keith :-)
DeleteLove the idea of the lone traveler seeking....as he walks the bridge!
ReplyDeleteLoved the hide and seek - nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteI really liked both ones
ReplyDeleteThank You Ali :-)
Deletethis is exquisite... I feel more meanings underlying here ... about life... nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja :-)
DeleteBoth Haiku have a charm of their own, the first one is more playful while the second is more philosophical...
ReplyDeleteI love this excellent piece!
ReplyDeleteThanks McGuffy :-)
DeleteCharming and loved the first, with the little game that the sun and moon play!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Nanka :-)
DeleteBoth so very beautiful. Love ♥
ReplyDeletenice one!!
ReplyDeletesimple sweet and beautiful...wish i could write haikus too..:(
ReplyDeleteAnd I wish I could write stories like you :-)
DeleteBoth were great. I particularly like the second.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
Delete1st one is soo unique!!!
ReplyDeletehttp://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/05/bridging-hearts.html
Excellent...both superb ... the second speaks louder to me.
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi
Thanks Siggi :-)
DeleteEach is wonderful but together they are complete. (even tho we are not suppose to write haiku as a "haiku poem"! - I always secretly look for the thread - don't tell anyone. . . )
ReplyDeleteReally really nice haiku
Ha ha ... I won't tell your secret anyone, don't worry :-P
Deletebeautiful haiku! The time when both sun and moon are up in the sky is beautiful and the place you set up sounds perfect!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sankara :-)
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