Hello
Yes dear
Oh, here, there
I follow you now
as you paint patterns
in the canvas of nothingness
void, depleted colors
strokes of brushes
fine, gentle, mild
you dissolve
sinking
This is my first attempt in writing a "pattern poem". I am really inspired by my friend Cat who writes beautiful poems which have a pattern of their own. Do check her blog here.
This Poem is shared with Magpie Tales.
Tears of joy ... Thank you ... you are the master of words, Mr.G ... I'm just stuttering and stumbling ...
ReplyDeleteYou are welcome my friend :-)
DeleteQuite skillful; well done...
ReplyDeleteThanks Berowne :-)
DeleteI like the words and the pattern. I looked at your friends blog - amazing how the patterns are formed!
ReplyDeleteThank You Robyn :-)
DeleteThis is gorgeous, I love the pattern!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteA painting that never quite got off the ground...ecgoes of the one that slipped away, but somegow still maddeningly near, just below the surface
ReplyDeleteYou have also written a pattern poem that is quite beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen :-)
DeleteThe patterns are nice, GS! Would have to spend a little time in arrangements I suppose! Nicely!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank You Hank :-)
DeleteNice diamond shape you created, Speck. I shall also try making an arrangement...Good fun!
ReplyDeleteThanks Panchali di :-)
DeleteYou did it beautifully in pattern and words. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Balqis :-)
DeleteLoved your pattern on the canvas of nothingness and the choice of words..
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteLovely and lyrical,,well done with your artistry,,
ReplyDeleteThank You Ellecee :-)
Delete"As you paint patterns on the canvas of nothingness" - love it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Divya :-)
Deletewow!!! lyrical and beautiful..:D...nice one..
ReplyDeleteThank You Vaisakhi :-)
DeletePlaying with forms here..haa...good one...you got the art..I can never for sure...looking forward to more of such patterns :)
ReplyDeleteJust tried my bit :-)
DeleteWell done Green...
ReplyDeleteThanks Tess :-)
DeleteThe format of the piece simply adds more beauty to the article!
ReplyDeleteThank You Helena :-)
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