I just cried for joy because of my playful kitten ... never ever will I allow myself to cry again for false promises of any human though ...
Yes ... humans can't keep promises !!!
I like black stains, an excellent metaphor ~
Thanks Grace :-)
wonderful haiku ~ the tears making the paper humid ~ creative! ^_^
Thank You Carol :-)
I too like black stains..emotions poured out well..
Thanks Odyzz :-)
wonderful! I agree with Grace, black stains is an excellent metaphor!
Thank You Momina :-)
to read them and know they are false, would def stain the relationship black...
And that's really sad !!!
meaningful nice haiku ...
Thanks Shivnath :-)
falsity always leaves a black stain behind...beautifully crafted lines!!
Thank You Reshma :-)
I just cried for joy because of my playful kitten ... never ever will I allow myself to cry again for false promises of any human though ...
ReplyDeleteYes ... humans can't keep promises !!!
DeleteI like black stains, an excellent metaphor ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :-)
Deletewonderful haiku ~ the tears making the paper humid ~ creative! ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank You Carol :-)
DeleteI too like black stains..emotions poured out well..
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
Deletewonderful! I agree with Grace, black stains is an excellent metaphor!
ReplyDeleteThank You Momina :-)
Deleteto read them and know they are false, would def stain the relationship black...
ReplyDeleteAnd that's really sad !!!
Deletemeaningful nice haiku ...
ReplyDeleteThanks Shivnath :-)
Deletefalsity always leaves a black stain behind...beautifully crafted lines!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
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