(Image Source: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.nl/2013/02/carpe-diem-special-22-chiyo-nis-morning.html)
morning glories
wake up the sun
stars seek nectar
silver tree
a blue bird sings
morning glories
morning glories
peep through my window
I smile
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Morning Glory.
These are very gentle
ReplyDeleteNicely done
Cheers!
JzB
Thanks JzB :-)
DeleteI agree with Jazzbumpa: It's the gentleness of these pieces that makes them shine!
DeleteComplaining Morning Glory
well written :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Dana :-)
DeleteOh GS these are wonderful! I especially enjoyed the idea of the flowers peeking in the window! Great image.
ReplyDeleteThank You Wabi :-)
Deletea very sweet, lovely set of haiku :) i enjoyed the image of morning glories waking up the sun :)
ReplyDeleteThanks kz :-)
DeleteIt is good to smile in recognition of God's Creations. Maybe that's why some Peeps go around with smiles on their faces all the day long.
ReplyDeleteWell said Sir ... we should learn to smile always !!!
DeleteBeautiful series of haiku inspired by the one of Chiyo-Ni. Thank you Green for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWho can resist morning glories peeping through the windows, beautiful imagination!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lolly :-)
ReplyDeleteNow I know why the stars sparkle as they do: It's the nectar!
ReplyDeleteMorning Glory Tea
Yes, that's the secret !!!
Deleteconsidering u wake up @ 8..its quite imaginative..just kidding ..i dint knw u cn do 3 verses in haiku..
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... I used to wake up at 5 when I was in school ... so used those memories :-)
DeleteYou can do any number of verses in haiku ... but each haiku should have three lines that stand on its own as a single haiku :-)
Love the turn around on flowers waking up the sun.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ben :-)
DeleteI am smiling after reading this :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Divya :-)
DeleteLovely Chiyo style haiku ~ ^_^
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments on Cape Diem.
Thanks Carol :-)
DeleteMorning glories and bluebirds both can definitely bring joy!
ReplyDeleteVery true Mary :-)
DeleteBrings me peace and joy.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :-)
DeleteThe morning has to be glorious with these beauties around :)
ReplyDeleteThey add beauty to mornings :-)
DeleteLovely piece, Mr.G ... but never try morning glory tea ...
ReplyDeleteOk ... will keep that in mind :-)
DeleteThis is lovely,,, a touch of summer to come,,,brightens up a dull day,,,
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