interesting....turquoise is a cool color...and swans are beautifulllso nice imagery...makes me wonder if you had something deeper in it though i am not getting...
I need to get busy on this prompt.. I hope I can catch it before it ends... Turquoise and swans... Beautiful gem and a beautiful bird.. put them together and you've got a series of beautiful words... Thank you for sharing Amrit!
interesting....turquoise is a cool color...and swans are beautifulllso nice imagery...makes me wonder if you had something deeper in it though i am not getting...
ReplyDeleteNothing deeper Brian ... just visualized the scene and wrote :-)
DeleteTurquoise is one of my favorite colors :)
ReplyDeleteIt really is a soothing color :-)
Deletelove the visual
ReplyDeleteI'm always amazed that haiku can say so much with so little
and you do it well
That's the magic of haiku ... and I am just learning :-)
DeleteI need to get busy on this prompt.. I hope I can catch it before it ends... Turquoise and swans... Beautiful gem and a beautiful bird.. put them together and you've got a series of beautiful words... Thank you for sharing Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Crystal :-)
Deletewonderful imagination, put in exquisite words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Meenakshi :-)
DeleteI loved it
ReplyDeleteLovely poem ~ ^_^
ReplyDeletePerfect! You are getting better everyday. :D
ReplyDeleteI hope so :-)
DeleteTurquoise is really a cool color ..and your words are refreshing ..nice
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
DeleteSimply wonderful GS!! The words bring out the image in the minds eye...
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
DeleteWell expressed! I love turquoise.
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