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let me sleep
within my cocoon
in peace
silk rain
on mulberry leaves
I wash my face
I play the flute
amid clouds of love
like butterfly
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Caterpillar.
Each haiku , if read separately too carries a message in itself . Thats brilliance . You have weaved magic with your words too like a caterpillar :)
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Delete* ad below your header , not behind ok
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DeleteThanks for such lovely words on my Haiku :-)
i like the calmness that each haiku exudes..love the mention of mulberry leaves :)
ReplyDeleteThanks kz :-)
Deletenice...particularly like that last stanza....between the flute and butterflies....beautiful elements...
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
Deletefrom cocoon to butterfly , you have covered the journey with élan. First one is my favourite.
ReplyDeleteThanks Meenakshi :-)
DeleteYour middle verse spoke joy to me! The idea of a caterpillar getting its face washed! Wonderful image.
ReplyDeleteWhere are the Butterflies?
Thank You Wabi :-)
DeleteI love the message of this one sir...transformation :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteI particularly like the second one, silk rain on mulberry leaves ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Grace :-)
DeleteLike the first GS! Very seldom one gets to be alone! Nice thoughts!
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Thanks Hank :-)
DeleteVery soothing haiku ~ well penned ~ ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank You Carol :-)
DeleteMy weekends are my cocoon!
ReplyDeleteSame with me :-)
Deletemusical and magical...and full of depth...
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DeleteThanks Joanne :-)
DeleteSimply lovely... First the peaceful sleep, then the fresh rain for face-wash, only the clouds of love could complete this dream...
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
DeleteOh, they are very nice, Green Speck. I like the last one bet.
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteGreen Speck your work is especially awesome today. Love the middle haiku the best.
ReplyDeleteThank You Lolly :-)
DeleteThese days, I wish for that too. Beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Raajii :-)
DeleteThat second haiku is pure brilliance.
ReplyDeleteBravo - all three a delight. Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteThanks jrb :-)
DeleteThese are lovely! So well expressed...each of them.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteBrilliant series on Caterpillar. Feels like meditation, contemplation and sweet silence. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan :-)
DeleteVery beautiful...especially the last one robbed my heart:) Kudos..
ReplyDeleteThank You Panchali Di :-)
DeleteAll so light and lovely...just like a butterfly.
ReplyDeleteThis is so pretty,,,,GS. all of it,,,makes my heart heal,,,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your constant support Ellecee :-)
DeleteAll so beautiful, but I adored the first one. It had a certain peace about it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
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