Dreams are so incredibly weird. Sometimes, even when you fail to recall the visuals, the feelings and emotions they aroused within you, they remain. Have experienced that quite a few times myself. Beautifully penned. Great work with the imagery too. :)
Hmmm... at least she was virtuous... she didn't run away with the diamond ! ;)
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... yes :D
Deletebetter happened than an illusion to live with! nice one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shweta :-)
DeleteWow ... like the vision - enchanting.
ReplyDeleteThank You Georgia :-)
Deletelovely and describes the heartbreak in a very beautiful and subtle way
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :-)
DeleteOh sad..she left !
ReplyDeleteYes :-(
DeleteA dream.. This is lovely as always!
ReplyDeleteThank You Crystal :-)
Delete:-) :-) I know she left and it subtly depicts a heart-break (I hope - at least that is my interpretation) but I cannot help smiling at your lines!
ReplyDeleteThanks Divya :-)
DeleteLoved the imagery you evoked with this piece.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kathy :-)
DeleteDreams are so incredibly weird. Sometimes, even when you fail to recall the visuals, the feelings and emotions they aroused within you, they remain. Have experienced that quite a few times myself. Beautifully penned. Great work with the imagery too. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Enigma :-)
DeleteA tender, mystical moment
ReplyDeleteWow what a gorgeous haiku Amrit ... great response on Edgar Allan Poe's A Dream within a Dream
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan :-)
DeleteI really like how you kept the mysterious feeling of Poe's poem... the pearl is the least worth keeping...
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :-)
DeleteOh, it's Leah!
ReplyDeleteJust gorgeous :D
Thank You :-)
DeleteThe pearl of great price and all you are left with.
ReplyDeleteThis was excellent Amrit
Thanks so much :-)
Deletehaiku with a pearl of excellence..true love never ends..Amrit smiles:))
ReplyDeleteThank You Adhi :-)
DeleteVery nice... At least the pearl remained along with the memories
ReplyDeleteThanks Satya :-)
Deletelovely it is :)
ReplyDeleteA romantic Haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
DeleteAt least something remained and you weren't left empty-handed!
ReplyDeleteFrom the Raven’s Beak
Yes :-)
DeleteWas it a beautiful dream or a beautiful reality...?
ReplyDeleteThat depends on the perspective :-)
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