Generally when we speak of dusk a kind of melancholia creeps in. But your lines created a romantic interlude with bidding adieu to a day and welcoming the night
Heheheh kya tha yeh. I just don't get what is Haiku. Its like going to an art exhibition and staring at a blank canvas for appreciating its minimalism. Hehe.
Beautiful, simple and elegant.
ReplyDeleteThank You Shweta :-)
DeleteAnd that says it all. Very well written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ekta :-)
Deleteand in this way the hours are exhausted..nice :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ankita :-)
DeleteSunset is always a spectacle worth watching!
ReplyDeleteYes it is :-)
DeleteThis is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteBoth ways,
Thank You :-)
DeleteHe's waiting for something.. And there goes the wheels in my head.. Lovely, as always!
ReplyDeleteThat's life: saying goodbye to one thing, and welcoming another.
ReplyDeleteCreeping Dusk
Well said Mark :-)
DeleteDude how do you manage to belt out so many haikus? *in awe* :)
ReplyDeleteYES! that's my question too!!
DeleteAnd mine too!
DeleteHa ha ... thanks for finding my haiku likable :P
DeleteVery sweet lines.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeletePark benches are good vantage points for all sorts of light...and darkness...
ReplyDeleteOne More Dusk
I agree :-)
DeleteSweet simplicity :)
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteVery nice imagination.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
DeleteThank You Dolores :-)
ReplyDeleteGenerally when we speak of dusk a kind of melancholia creeps in. But your lines created a romantic interlude with bidding adieu to a day and welcoming the night
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteSimply nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteHeheheh kya tha yeh. I just don't get what is Haiku. Its like going to an art exhibition and staring at a blank canvas for appreciating its minimalism. Hehe.
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha ... loved your definition :D
DeleteA day caught in three lines. Awesome!
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