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light
for you I yearn
fire
and thus I burn
ashes
narrate a trail so thin
blood
lost dreams shall swim
fake
brightness I chase
truth
deceiving phase
lessons
once taught
ideas
long sought
love
weary ruins shall cry
tears
tired soul now dry
start
the journey once again
end
the fear of approaching pain
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ReplyDeleteSo beautiful. Your writing still has the same interesting factor even better :)
ReplyDeleteThanks DA :-)
DeleteThat first stanza is outstanding!
ReplyDeleteLike that moth -- there is a general truth of how we burn in vain.
ReplyDeleteWell said Bjorn :-)
DeleteSo glad I took the time to visit before church. This is very beautiful! Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal :-)
Deletelove this journey, this yearning for light and dispelling fear...
ReplyDeleteI specially like the tight opening verses ~ The ending and beginning are twined so close in our journey ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :-)
Deleteloved ur take.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ekta :-)
Delete"start
ReplyDeletethe journey once again
end
the fear of approaching pain"
So beautiful, Amrit! :)
Thanks Pooja :-)
DeleteI too love the beginning and end. Just lovely
ReplyDeleteHmmmm!
ReplyDeleteZQ
:-)
DeleteI love the beginning....beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks Susie :-)
DeleteAH! A Morality Poem.
ReplyDeleteFake brightness, deceiving truth,
Every day can be a "New Beginning"...
WELL done, Amrit.
Thank You Steve :-)
Deletelost dreams shall swim again
ReplyDeleteyes the have to
how will the tired soul otherwise dry
Wonderful touched my soul
Thanks DG :-)
DeleteA dry gully , Speck , that shall some day flow again ....
ReplyDeleteAmen :-)
DeleteTrue it is the life of a moth and man. Lovely write.
ReplyDeleteThanks Karen :-)
DeleteWonderful writing, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
DeleteLoved this verse
ReplyDeletefake
brightness I chase
truth
deceiving phase
Nice take on the picture :D
Thanks Vaisakhi :-)
DeleteBeautiful...
ReplyDeleteThank You Tess :-)
DeleteAlpha and Omega. Nice Mag. Love and Light, S
ReplyDeleteThanks S :-)
DeleteSo beautiful,
ReplyDeleteThank You Sanjay ji :-)
Deletebeautiful , speechless
ReplyDeleteSee The Sea
Thanks Cifar :-)
DeleteWonderful! I love your opening haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteGreatly weaved +Amrit Sinha....Superb!! and I liked the way the TEXT ARE ALIGNED... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Madhavi :-)
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