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surprise was -
on a bright March morn
Spring blooming in dawn
lips nervous, eyes raining wide
bent on my knees, proposing for a ride
"Yes," u said
"Forever," I prayed.
surprise was -
the summer I turned twenty
in June, gifts received aplenty
but none as special as this
closing my eyes, I experienced bliss
our first kiss, witnessed by stars
ever so special, I knew we'd go far.
surprise was -
autumn breeze in September skies
colours fading amidst those lies
the first glimpse of distrust, and you said "Sorry"
things would be fine, I hoped, trying not to worry
"Let's start afresh, let's give it a try,
the ice would melt, baby please don't cry."
surprise was -
December cold burning with tears
crushed under blows of myriad fears
you said you've found someone, and departed with a "Bye"
I sat down on the corridor, trying to find out "Why"
a new year around the corner, but would Spring ever be back
I try to erase, but your scent still lingers on my track.
This Poem is shared with Mindlovemisery's Menagerie - Surprise.
ohhh..that was such a piquant poem Amrit. From the beautiful dreamlike beginning to a sordid end surfacing a heart-breaking betrayal, each word is laden with intense emotions..loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :-)
DeleteAwwww .......That's so beautiful :) Just Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Vinisha :-)
DeleteDifferent seasons of love.. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Satya :-)
DeleteSo many of us can empathise with your suffering...it does not last and a much lovelier girl will enhance your life like a
ReplyDeletenew breath of Spring... :)
Thank You :-)
DeleteBeautifully penned Sinha :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna :-)
Deleteah how we toss around words like love and forever without really comprehending their meaning...what a hard place to be as well...small betrayals of the heart---they hurt....
ReplyDeleteThey do hurt :-)
DeleteSuch a heartbreaking story! :/ :( Touched !
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
DeleteMay the march morn come again.....
ReplyDeleteThis was yet again a brilliant one.
Thank You Red :-)
Deletewonderfully worded Amrit, varied emotions like the seasons...
ReplyDeleteSuch rawness here, Amrit. You cold feel the hope and joy breaking down bit by bit.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
DeleteAll the seasons in beautiful words. I had tried Haiku on seasons and posted earlier.
ReplyDeleteI m here for the first time...
ReplyDeleteAnd... WOW!!!
Its so beautiful... :) :) :)
Thank You Rupasi :-)
DeleteI hope spring surprises you with joy. Beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteThis is heart-breaking, poignant, and tender, beautiful writing Amrit
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
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