mmm mmm mmmm, very moody haiku Amrit, enjoyed it immensely !
Lovely read for my morning. Thank you sir.
Thank You Keith :-)
Rivulets carry memories , secrets not just water and pebbles.
Well said :-)
Would you listen to the storiesThat I wish to forget :)This one is amazing
So clever and thought provoking. Lovely haiku!
Thanks Write Girl :-)
Lovely poem ... never forgetting about you, Mr. G ...
Brilliant and soulful, Amrit!
Thank You Celestine :-)
I see you pouring your heart out to a winding blue river. I wonder if that is where you saw yourself?
Perhaps that's where we go at some points of our lives :-)
She soothes aching hearts with her murmurs...Nicely done Amrit!!
Thanks Reshma :-)
may she wash awayeach sad painful memoryyou wish to forget
Thanks for the wish friend :-)
Only if forgetting was so easy. :) Great one.
Thanks Harshal :-)
This reminds me of a stream I used to visit as a child. There was a listening spirit there for me. I like the personal feeling in the poem.
Interesting imagery.
Thank You :-)
Amazing!! Is it easy to forget?
You can never forget :-)
Never enough water for so many words. Nice piece.
Nicely done, that was from the soul!
mmm mmm mmmm, very moody haiku Amrit, enjoyed it immensely !
ReplyDeleteLovely read for my morning. Thank you sir.
ReplyDeleteThank You Keith :-)
DeleteRivulets carry memories , secrets not just water and pebbles.
ReplyDeleteWell said :-)
DeleteWould you listen to the stories
ReplyDeleteThat I wish to forget :)
This one is amazing
So clever and thought provoking. Lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks Write Girl :-)
DeleteLovely poem ... never forgetting about you, Mr. G ...
ReplyDeleteBrilliant and soulful, Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteI see you pouring your heart out to a winding blue river. I wonder if that is where you saw yourself?
ReplyDeletePerhaps that's where we go at some points of our lives :-)
DeleteShe soothes aching hearts with her murmurs...Nicely done Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
Deletemay she wash away
ReplyDeleteeach sad painful memory
you wish to forget
Thanks for the wish friend :-)
DeleteOnly if forgetting was so easy. :) Great one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Harshal :-)
DeleteThis reminds me of a stream I used to visit as a child. There was a listening spirit there for me. I like the personal feeling in the poem.
ReplyDeleteInteresting imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteAmazing!! Is it easy to forget?
ReplyDeleteYou can never forget :-)
DeleteNever enough water for so many words. Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteNicely done, that was from the soul!
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