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Between you and me
The world will sway
As we light up the sun
And paint the moon
In our canvas of love
Red, green and blue.
Between you and me
Creation will answer
Myriad questions
That lie buried in the sand
Where we build castles
In the sea of dreams.
Between you and me
Closets lay bare
Skeletons tumble out
Narrating their tales
Of fairies and demons
Who pass by our fate.
Between you and me
Nectar savored
At the edge of our lips
The joy of passion
Uncovered, discovered
Ecstasy gets a name.
Between you and me
Lies the mountain of trust
Weaving this magic of undying love.
This Poem is shared with Sunday Scribblings and the Prompt is Between You and Me.
between you and me such nice interpretation! Good job :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Dark Angel :-)
DeleteBeautifully done!
ReplyDeleteThank You Mama Zen :-)
DeleteI like this beautiful love poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leovi :-)
Deleteso beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Laura :-)
DeleteVery nice, G.S. ~~ It makes me wish I could write nice love poems.
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I especially like the verse,
DeleteNectar savored
At the edge of our lips
The joy of passion
Uncovered, discovered
Ecstasy gets a name.
and your writing here of passion discoverable. Internal rhyme, covered, 'un' and 'dis,' was a pleasant surprise.
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Thank You so much Jim. You are one of those bloggers I really admire and look up to for inspiration. Thanks for appreciating my work. Your comments are always a pleasure :-)
DeleteThank YOU, GS
Deleteenjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeleteThanks Unfettered :-)
DeleteBeautiful in every way!
ReplyDeleteOh, that it is so.
Thank You Mary :-)
DeleteAmazing, beautiful! 'uncover discover'-You are a master at play of words. Every line is just wow!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Meenakshi :-)
DeleteEvery line is precious here... beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sreeja :-)
DeleteAgain touchy....keep up the good work...
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Thank You Noopur :-)
DeleteLies the mountain of trust
ReplyDeleteWeaving this magic of undying love
That sums it all,undying love shared between 2 souls. Nicely GS!
Hank
Thanks Hank :-)
DeleteSimply brilliant ! And very lyrical . I felt the emotional vibe while reading it. I just loved it. well done !
ReplyDeletereally amazing and beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinisha :-)
DeleteYou discover and undiscover and learn to chose and learn to appreciate and learn to forgive ... amazing words, Mr. Green ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteThank You Cat :-)
DeleteBetween you and me, I think this is beautiful. Some of your imagery is just... amazing. Loved this
ReplyDeleteNectar savored
At the edge of our lips
The joy of passion
Uncovered, discovered
Thanks Bren :-)
DeleteTwo people who love one another are a formidable force. Great love poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully put. Full of caring and trust and love. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks J :-)
Deletemy favorite -
ReplyDeleteBetween you and me
Closets lay bare
Skeletons tumble out
Narrating their tales
Of fairies and demons
Who pass by our fate.
This shows so well how strong this love is..
Thank You friend :-)
DeleteEvery stanza stand out on its own, singing the tale of true love. WOOOW, Greeny this was the bestest poem from you :) Take care!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much buddy :-)
DeleteBetween you and me and everyone fortunate enough to read your poem, this is beautiful! Such love expressed in your words!
ReplyDeleteThank You so much Robyn :-)
DeleteThe world will sway
ReplyDeleteAs we light up the sun
And paint the moon
In our canvas of love
Love that!
Thanks Margaret :-)
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