new day
I will pack the
candles in my blue bag
that Santa gifted me last year
along with the sweets and chocolates
wrapped in boxes, red, blue and green, yellow
and walk to the dark alleys of sadness
where Christmas isn't a luxury
neither a need, hence I'll
light up the candles
share smiles
new day
This Poem is shared with dVerse Poetics - Candles and Lights.
Let those smiles light up your life !!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Veena :-)
DeleteSuch kind words..
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
Deletelove the packing of the things you have been gifted with and use it to help those in need....this is what christmas is about...carrying on the light... very cool amrit...loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks Claudia :-)
Deletenice...love the compassion in this....after being given, taking that to give back to those in need....giving them a bit of the magic of christmas...i love it....
ReplyDeleteI really love the style of this Amrit. I also love the theme of sharing Christmas joys with those who need it the most.
ReplyDeleteThank You Keith :-)
DeleteI love the idea of lighting the candles and sharing smiles! What joy! (I like the form of your poem as well!)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-)
Deleteawww! so much hope and optimism, cheers! to the thought!
ReplyDeleteThank You Akila :-)
DeleteVery inspiring poem. This formation of the poem is called 'nonet', is'nt it?
ReplyDeleteI do not know that ... but I loved this form that a fellow blogger uses, and I tried to adopt it :-)
DeleteI loved the shape, and your words are as usual full of light and compassion :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sadia :-)
DeleteOh you have a diamond soul.. do so.. bring candles and candy,,
ReplyDeleteThank You Bjorn :-)
DeleteDifferent form and style - but so rightly said.
ReplyDeleteThanks Abhra :-)
DeleteI love the diamond shape you have given to it...and the lines are so beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Namrota :-)
Delete"Dark alleys of sadness" magic!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pealogic :-)
DeleteSharing smiles is the best gift we can give any stranger :)
ReplyDeleteI agree :-)
Deleteloved the artistic design of this post. Wonderfully weaved... Sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank You buddy :-)
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