Tuesday, December 31, 2013

And Smiles

gifts and cakes
little boy dreams of Santa
and smiles

and smiles
the pavement where he sleeps
now a mansion


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Expectations.




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21 comments:

  1. Maya12/31/2013 03:27:00 am

    Impressive!!!

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  2. Anonymous12/31/2013 05:37:00 am

    "now a mansion" - what an ending. Like!

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  3. Milan Rajkumar12/31/2013 05:55:00 pm

    so beautiful !

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  4. Unknown12/31/2013 10:05:00 pm

    innovative! :)

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  5. Anonymous1/01/2014 12:35:00 am

    Very nice contrast of dreams and reality.

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  6. Sumana Roy1/01/2014 03:07:00 pm

    beautiful and sad...

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  7. Pealogic1/01/2014 11:33:00 pm

    Phew, what a twist.
    Ciao
    Pea

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  8. Judith Westerfield1/02/2014 12:47:00 am

    breaking the readers expectation - brrrrrrrrrrrriliantly done.

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  9. Ramesh Sood1/02/2014 09:48:00 am

    Beautiful... great haiku....Amrit..

    RS:)

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  10. Unknown1/02/2014 01:12:00 pm

    Wooah! You got me hooked! Bravo :)

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  11. SheReef 1/02/2014 03:12:00 pm

    dream came true for you... nice

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  12. Reshma1/05/2014 01:03:00 am

    I hope his dream comes true...

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