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Thank You Rupertt :-)
beautiful . used rainbow as a slide.
Thanks a lot :-)
Creative and original haiku .Well done.
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lovely play!
Thanks Celestine :-)
aww...beautiful haiku.
Thank You Panchali ma'am :-)
very nice.. :)
May I come over to play? ;-)
Definitely :-)
Beautiful! :)
Thank You Balqis :-)
Nostalgic :)
Thanks Asma :-)
Aha! I almost saw myself doing that. Beautiful.
Thank You Rajesh :-)
Thats so imaginative Amrit...Nice one!
Nd sometimes our knees break down while falling from that rainbow :D
Ha ha ha ... so wear knee guards before sliding down :-P
Oh wow, it is a very impressive Haiku,Amrit.A unique thought.
Love the deceptive simplicity of this evocative haiku. Marie
Thanks Marie :-)
very nicely done, the simple joys of childhood:)
Thank You Reshma :-)
Playful! I imagined this thought too!
Thanks a lot Valli :-)
joyful moment - brings in visions of warm smiles and laughter
Thank You Sun :-)
slide down the rainbowlanding in a pot of goldswim with the goldfish
Wow ... loved it :-)
Beautiful and to the point. I like this haiku contribution.Eliz
Lovely.
Thank You :-)
Beautiful :D
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Thank You Rupertt :-)
Deletebeautiful . used rainbow as a slide.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteCreative and original haiku .Well done.
ReplyDelete:) :)
ReplyDelete:) :) :)
Deletelovely play!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
Deleteaww...beautiful haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank You Panchali ma'am :-)
Deletevery nice.. :)
ReplyDeleteMay I come over to play? ;-)
ReplyDeleteDefinitely :-)
DeleteBeautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Balqis :-)
DeleteNostalgic :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Asma :-)
DeleteAha! I almost saw myself doing that. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Rajesh :-)
DeleteThats so imaginative Amrit...
ReplyDeleteNice one!
Nd sometimes our knees break down while falling from that rainbow :D
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha ... so wear knee guards before sliding down :-P
DeleteOh wow, it is a very impressive Haiku,Amrit.A unique thought.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteLove the deceptive simplicity of this evocative haiku. Marie
ReplyDeleteThanks Marie :-)
Deletevery nicely done, the simple joys of childhood:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
DeletePlayful! I imagined this thought too!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Valli :-)
Deletejoyful moment - brings in visions of warm smiles and laughter
ReplyDeleteThank You Sun :-)
Deleteslide down the rainbow
ReplyDeletelanding in a pot of gold
swim with the goldfish
Wow ... loved it :-)
DeleteBeautiful and to the point. I like this haiku contribution.
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Lovely.
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