I don't have even red plastic bag...duh...:P Nice one :)
Ha ha ... thanks Sadia :-)
Ex-box and failed promises. Love this one. :)
So sad but beautiful.
Thank You Geeta :-)
feelings well expressed Amrit...http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/12/gift-of-winter-haiku.html#comment-formRS:)
Thanks Ramesh Sir :-)
Sad and yet very poignant... Richa
Thank You Richa :-)
Ohh.. thats a sad one.. But a different take on the prompt.. usually people associate gifts with happiness
Thanks Jyotsna :-)
Amrit, this is so intense and profound !
Failed promises hurt a lot and cannot be compensated with gifts. beautifully penned.
Thanks a lot :-)
Yes it comes both ways! Can't win them all! Nicely Amrit!Hank
Thank You Hank :-)
Nice job with the changing emotion at the last line.
Thank You :-)
Failed ... but new chance?
Sad and beautiful at the same time. Great post. :-)
Thanks Irene :-)
heart-breaking for both....nicely done.....
Thank You Sumana :-)
Nicely painted - it tells a great story in few words!
Thanks so much :-)
Failed promises... Sigh"!!
:-)
Beautiful and sad!
intense and sad.....beautifully written!
Thank You Sreeja :-)
Aiyo! Why tell a tale of failed promises around Christmas?!?!
Ha ha ha .... chalta hain :-P
Life always has a way of balancing itself, even a rose has thorns...
Very true ... there are good and bad sides everywhere :-)
plastic isn't allowed nowadays :Pbut yeah nice haiku :)
Thanks Dark Angel :-)
Deep and meaningful.
Oh, bleak! Great visual writing.
I love the red plastic bag image. It hold so much.
Thank You Alice :-)
Reply my comment too :p
Lo kar diya :-P
I don't have even red plastic bag...duh...:P Nice one :)
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DeleteEx-box and failed promises. Love this one. :)
ReplyDeleteSo sad but beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Geeta :-)
Deletefeelings well expressed Amrit...
ReplyDeletehttp://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/12/gift-of-winter-haiku.html#comment-form
RS:)
Thanks Ramesh Sir :-)
DeleteSad and yet very poignant...
ReplyDeleteRicha
Thank You Richa :-)
DeleteOhh.. thats a sad one.. But a different take on the prompt.. usually people associate gifts with happiness
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna :-)
DeleteAmrit, this is so intense and profound !
ReplyDeleteFailed promises hurt a lot and cannot be compensated with gifts. beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteYes it comes both ways! Can't win them all! Nicely Amrit!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank You Hank :-)
DeleteNice job with the changing emotion at the last line.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteFailed ... but new chance?
ReplyDeleteSad and beautiful at the same time. Great post. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Irene :-)
Deleteheart-breaking for both....nicely done.....
ReplyDeleteThank You Sumana :-)
DeleteNicely painted - it tells a great story in few words!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteFailed promises... Sigh"!!
ReplyDelete:-)
DeleteBeautiful and sad!
ReplyDeleteintense and sad.....beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
DeleteAiyo! Why tell a tale of failed promises around Christmas?!?!
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha .... chalta hain :-P
DeleteLife always has a way of balancing itself, even a rose has thorns...
ReplyDeleteVery true ... there are good and bad sides everywhere :-)
Deleteplastic isn't allowed nowadays :P
ReplyDeletebut yeah nice haiku :)
Thanks Dark Angel :-)
DeleteDeep and meaningful.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteOh, bleak! Great visual writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteI love the red plastic bag image. It hold so much.
ReplyDeleteThank You Alice :-)
DeleteReply my comment too :p
ReplyDeleteLo kar diya :-P
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