monsoon nectar
pouring down from heaven
a lotus blooms here
a lotus blooms here
in the midst of that pond
where once we kissed
where once we kissed
now hopes filled with muddy drought
longing for rebirth
longing for rebirth
I tread along unknown path
a lotus blooms here
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Hasu (Lotus).
Lovely rebirth of love ... is possible ... I'm going through it right now ... I think ... :)
ReplyDeleteThat's great Cat :-)
DeleteYou write beautifully, my friend.
ReplyDeletewow..
ReplyDeletemonsoon nectar.. Loved it
Thank You Jyoti :-)
DeleteWhat a beautiful story caught in a wonderful cascading haiku. Thank you Amrit for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Kristjaan :-)
DeleteSuch a sweet and beautiful cascade.
ReplyDeleteThank You Maggie :-)
DeleteMay your life's pond be filled with many Lotus :)
ReplyDeleteLotus
Thank you very much my friend :-)
DeleteSimply beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
Deletefabulous cascade...
ReplyDeleteThank You Joanne :-)
DeleteSimply superb...the lines create such gorgeous imageries even the sad ones!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Geetashree :-)
DeleteI love the way you developed the ideas. Beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Balqis :-)
DeleteThose unknown paths call for caution!
ReplyDeletePerhaps a Lotus
But the heart throws caution to the wind :-P
Deletelovely story embedded in words of the haiku...nice one...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear :-)
DeleteI always get lost in your poetry.
ReplyDeleteI hope you find your way too :-P
DeleteThe second haiku in the cascade is excellent
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :-)
DeleteI just loved monsoon nectar!! Can anything be more divine than love across time?
ReplyDeleteTrue ... love can't be surpassed :-)
DeleteI like how the lotus blooms throughout :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ben :-)
Deletelovely post...buddy...n i am liking the change of ur blog..!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteJust beautiful, birth of a bloom.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
Deleteso beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
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