I used to toss twigs into a moving stream and fallow the twigs path as long as I could. Good times :)I miss your visits Amrit!
Thanks Keith ... I miss too, but work keeping me busy nowadays :-(
beautiful ! i take the red pebble as a simile of a heart you long for ! your idea may be a different one ...but the haiku itself has a classic tone !
Thank You Rajkumar :-)
nice imagery! beautiful!
Thanks Payal :-)
Nice image of patience!
Thank You :-)
Ya ... me too ... waiting for my zest of life to return
Have a great day Cat :-)
and it will come Amrit, this is sooooo tender.
I walk down the winding shores of this eternal stream and at every turn, I wait for its return :)
That's such a beautiful thought :-)
Waiting is a test of nerves... In this case however the wait seems to be for something that holds a special place in your thoughts.
Yes, sometimes the wait bears fruit :-)
Optimism there...Nice take on the prompt!
Thanks Satya :-)
Perfect, Amrit
Thank You Celestine :-)
Lovely imagery!
Thanks so much :-)
I used to toss twigs into a moving stream and fallow the twigs path as long as I could. Good times :)
ReplyDeleteI miss your visits Amrit!
Thanks Keith ... I miss too, but work keeping me busy nowadays :-(
Deletebeautiful ! i take the red pebble as a simile of a heart you long for !
ReplyDeleteyour idea may be a different one ...but the haiku itself has a classic tone !
Thank You Rajkumar :-)
Deletenice imagery! beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Payal :-)
DeleteNice image of patience!
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteYa ... me too ... waiting for my zest of life to return
ReplyDeleteHave a great day Cat :-)
Deleteand it will come Amrit, this is sooooo tender.
ReplyDeleteI walk down the winding shores of this eternal stream and at every turn, I wait for its return :)
ReplyDeleteThat's such a beautiful thought :-)
DeleteWaiting is a test of nerves... In this case however the wait seems to be for something that holds a special place in your thoughts.
ReplyDeleteYes, sometimes the wait bears fruit :-)
DeleteOptimism there...
ReplyDeleteNice take on the prompt!
Thanks Satya :-)
DeletePerfect, Amrit
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteLovely imagery!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
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