a few stories
you whisper
as I close my eyes
in satiated slumber
dipped in honey
kisses and tears
soaked in love
and a tinge of fear
sulking in fables
I dance with my muse
by the open window
and the naughty breeze
so gently
wakes me up
moments of ecstasy
in words they dissolve
secrets long lost
and that's exactly how
poems evolve
This Poem is shared with Magpie Tales - Mag 208.
bhery good .. i likes :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Heena :-)
Deletedancing with the muse when the naughty wind wakes you up...ha...i love that...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
DeleteI specially like this part:
ReplyDeletesecrets long lost
and that's exactly how
poems evolve
Good one ~
Thanks Grace :-)
DeleteAmazing lines~
ReplyDeletemoments of ecstasy
in words they dissolve
secrets long lost
and that's exactly how
poems evolve
Loved it! :-)
Thank You Dear :-)
DeleteEach line fills the readers with verve and vigour...the naughty breeze so gently wakes me up...superb!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Adhi :-)
Deletesuper.. dats exactly how poems evolve ;)
ReplyDeleteYou perfectly captured how poems come to the writer's mind here - absolutely fantastic Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteAwesome,Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
Deletethe mysterious ways of the poet's muse...a very lovely poem, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteWow... This is indeed how poems evolve!
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy :-)
DeleteHmmm, now I know the secret behind your wonderful creations Amrit :)
ReplyDeleteIsn't this secret universal? ;-)
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