Monday, December 31, 2012

I have Wiped The Slate Clean



I have wiped the slate clean

Will you draw the promises
That lingered in our breaths
As we kissed the stars

Or will you scribble the wounds
That painted my tears
Of muted submissions.

The choice yours, the fate mine.
And tonight in your feast I will gladly dine.




This Poem is shared with Carry On Tuesday.






35 comments:

  1. Hoping it will be the promises.....smile!

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  2. Its sad when we wish someone else to write n decide our path...
    Really a good one....:)

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  3. You can only wait and see! Delightful.

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  4. Wonderfully said GS! To be caring for and be cared for by a loved one is the ultimate! Happy New Year to you!

    Hank

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  5. why would you dine? :/








    it is good though!

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  6. Wonderfully written :-) !

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  7. So many times we depend on others for our happiness. You captured this well.

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  8. Hi G.S.!! Beautiful poem, especially love "draw the promises and scribble the wounds"

    Happy New Year!! Thank you so much for your constant support and kindness :-)

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    1. Happy New Year Sara ... Your poems constantly motivate me to write better :-)

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  9. Wishing you well ... Happy New Year, Mr. G ... thank you, love you ... cat.

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  10. Last two lines are amazing! I hope it is the promises that are written across.

    A very happy new year!

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  11. Oh my!
    Well well. This is perfect in scheme and expression.
    Wow.

    Keep it up.
    And a happy New Year 2013.

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  12. last two lines ..are just wow..:)

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