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I have wiped the slate clean
Will you draw the promises
That lingered in our breaths
As we kissed the stars
Or will you scribble the wounds
That painted my tears
Of muted submissions.
The choice yours, the fate mine.
And tonight in your feast I will gladly dine.
This Poem is shared with Carry On Tuesday.
Hoping it will be the promises.....smile!
ReplyDeleteIts sad when we wish someone else to write n decide our path...
ReplyDeleteReally a good one....:)
awesome:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Aishwariya :-)
DeleteYou can only wait and see! Delightful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Keiths :-)
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Happy New Year Avy :-)
DeleteWonderfully said GS! To be caring for and be cared for by a loved one is the ultimate! Happy New Year to you!
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Happy New Year Hank :-)
DeleteThanks Noopur :-)
ReplyDeletewhy would you dine? :/
ReplyDeleteit is good though!
Perhaps I am hungry :-P
DeleteWonderfully written :-) !
ReplyDeleteThanks Dana :-)
DeleteSo many times we depend on others for our happiness. You captured this well.
ReplyDeleteThank You Bo :-)
DeleteHi G.S.!! Beautiful poem, especially love "draw the promises and scribble the wounds"
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year!! Thank you so much for your constant support and kindness :-)
Happy New Year Sara ... Your poems constantly motivate me to write better :-)
DeleteWishing you well ... Happy New Year, Mr. G ... thank you, love you ... cat.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Cat :-)
Deletehappy new year!
ReplyDeleteSame to you my friend :-)
DeleteLast two lines are amazing! I hope it is the promises that are written across.
ReplyDeleteA very happy new year!
Happy New Year Meenakshi :-)
DeleteOh my!
ReplyDeleteWell well. This is perfect in scheme and expression.
Wow.
Keep it up.
And a happy New Year 2013.
Happy New Year friend :-)
Deletelast two lines ..are just wow..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vandana :-)
DeleteI hope dinner was good!
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