Monday, December 17, 2012

If Wishes Were Stars

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If wishes were stars
I would pluck them from heaven
Diamonds for your ring.

Diamonds for your ring
Your ecstatic eyes sparkle
My heart hums love tune.

My heart hums love tune
Wandering in wishful bliss
I, losing my way.

I, losing my way
Come across your pink cottage
You open the door.

You open the door
Unwrap twinkling messages
Sweet glances stolen.

Sweet glances stolen
Fairy flies back to her moon
Turns wishes to stars.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Wishes.






50 comments:

  1. holy shit...you are amazing..seriously..:)

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  2. And the circle is completed. Bot not the way your poet writer w's wanting at the start. Clever :)

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    1. Just tried to do that way, but had to find an alternative :-)

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  3. This is lovely. It reads almost like a fairy tale yet is so romantic!

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  4. beautifully done

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  5. "turns wishes to stars" such a lovely last line to embrace the haiku

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  6. just beautiful - <3

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  7. "Diamonds for your ring
    Your ecstatic eyes sparkle
    My heart hums love tune"----awesome! In fact, each one of them is a magical piece :)

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  8. And..another one from your magic crate!! If wishes were stars....I love the line and I'd love to utter it again and again. Lovely poem :)

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    1. Thanks buddy for your constant encouragement :-)

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  9. And all the images create such a dazzling story....)))

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  10. Fairy tale romance that everyone wishes to come true! Magical is the word! too good!!

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  11. Lovely, as usual Mr. Speck :)

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  12. Aww.... Cute :)
    I wish if it could have been possible for you....

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  13. SIMPLY Beautiful, a profound piece. :) Romance at its best :) Cool!

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  14. Beautiful, as always :) My fave lines would be- "If wishes were stars
    I would pluck them from heaven
    Diamonds for your ring."

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  15. Ah, I love this, a little like a dream:)
    I love the picture too I used it for a story
    http://planetcyberluz.com/2011/06/01/drawing-down-the-moon/

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  16. wow Amrit, this is so good... you weaved magic here! The closing lines are really fantastic bringing the dream like magic.

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  17. Wow,so wonderful and romantic, Green Speck!!!
    My favorite line (difficult task for them all are precious): My heart hums love tune.
    :)))

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  18. I'll say to you something one of my teachers once said to me: "The world loves a storyteller."

    Wish Upon a Petal

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  19. I love the stars into ring, wishes into stars magic of this narrative set of Haiku, Each is such a lovely image.

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  20. Lovely and romantic haiku ~

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  21. romantically written...awesome...totally loved it<3

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