o' dear summer
will you melt this bleeding snow
songs of barren love
songs of barren love
lost in your silent gazes
trust and faith misplaced
trust and faith misplaced
yet, a faint drop of hope blooms
amidst shadows dark
amidst shadows dark
lost affections guide us through
to togetherness
It's a 'wow' poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ankita :-)
Delete.....To bliss and to everlasting happiness
ReplyDeleteSerene and soulful composition Amrit.
Thanks Anupam :-)
DeleteBeautiful! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ermie :-)
Delete''lost affections guide us through
ReplyDeleteto togetherness''
I didn't get this...
How lost affection can guide of togetherness?
Affections may have got lost but not the memories ... perhaps, some day those memories may reflect on the future, brighter and happier :-)
Delete*sigh* I'm yet to recover from the awesomeness of this poem to say anything at all.
ReplyDeleteAnd that says a lot .... thank you sooooooooooo much :-D
DeleteAs long as we have a faint drop of hope, we will be all right--sooner or later.
ReplyDeleteHMH: Perhaps the Tortoise
Hope is what we need always :-)
DeleteAaaaaaghhhhh!!! This is beautiful!! I just love it!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a tonne Crystal :-)
Delete"trust and faith misplaced
ReplyDeleteyet, a faint drop of hope blooms
amidst shadows dark"
STORY OF MY LIFE.
Same pinch :-)
DeletePoetry, fiction, haiku, limerick, songs. Is there something you cannot write?
ReplyDeleteJealousy just multiplied! :P
Yes...I wish I could write these with the power punch that your writings carry. Am jealous too :-/
DeleteNice cascading haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Satya :-)
DeleteThe first verse made me imagine Orloaf singing some song...slowly it got deep and very thoughtful...lovely poem..:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Vaisakhi :-)
DeleteI love that third stanza - "a faint drop of hope blooms"...we always gotta keep our eye on that faint drop :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteBeautiful versification,Amrit. All the four-one better than the other.
ReplyDeleteLoved the subtle presence of hope Amrit,.spring is here and it will surely bring blossoms of love :)
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteLove this...especially the idea of summer melting all the bleeding snow. We had entirely too much snow last winter and I am glad to see it gone! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy :-)
Deletevery deep and thoughtful
ReplyDeletei liked the gentle sadness it is imbued with
Thank You Melia :-)
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