you burn, cry, and raise a hue
and then you wage a battle of moral
maligning my words, I always knew
hey wait, I am not here to rest on your laurel
if you wanna play the game
you got to play it fair
else, you can always walk in shame
and do keep in mind, I don't care
vengeance, if that's what you say
ignore, why should I waste my time on this
better you strut your very own way
and in your absence, I will live in bliss
This Poem is shared with Three Word Wednesday - Burn, Hue, Moral.
Wow. Power and raw emotion. Brilliantly penned.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteApplause Amrit!.
ReplyDeleteVengeance should be asked to strut away as it is not worth wasting time and peace on plotting something evil.
Thanks :-)
DeleteI'm not here to restore your laurel... great line!
ReplyDeleteThank You Kim :-)
DeleteSounds like the absolutely best decision to make! This was a very nice read!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteWell done. Sometimes it is a wise thing to walk away...
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thanks Anna :-)
Delete'I don't care' - that is indeed the right attitude to have with people like these. Good work!
ReplyDeleteThank You Nisha :-)
DeleteI love your tone and attitude in this poem! Great one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Aditi :-)
DeletePowerful, brutal, and full of attitude. I like it!
ReplyDeleteThank You Kathy :-)
Deleteah i dont know if fair has a place in the game of game you know
ReplyDeleteit seems it is all in the hands of the one willing to make the rules...
smiles.
Perhaps ... but dignity should be maintained :-)
DeleteLove the raw emotions!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pooja :-)
DeleteAmazing, neat, loved it!
ReplyDeleteYes,Amrit,better if we ignore vengeance.
ReplyDeleteYes indeed :-)
DeleteDoes not sound like a good match. Split is the answer.
ReplyDeleteSometimes splitting is the best answer :-)
DeleteOh yeah! Bliss in someone's absense, I know that feeling! :)
ReplyDelete:-)
DeleteWow!! What a way to send the message out with a vengeance, loved the tempo of the word flow Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
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