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Purple night
With the stars we play
Melting on the grass
And then u say
"I love you not,
It's just a silly lie,
Like snow in desert,
And wings that can't fly."
You mock at my fear,
The one that came true,
But I won't shed a tear,
'Cause this isn't anything new.
My heart now wrinkled,
In pages from the past,
That song I still sing,
The one you taught me last.
I searched for you,
In memories gray and black,
And then I knew,
You would never come back.
A parched smile,
A tired sigh,
On a night like this,
I am too weak to cry.
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The poem is just so beautiful and the heart break in it just rips apart. beautiful write!
ReplyDeleteThanks Vandana :-)
DeleteI told you how I loved this creation, didn't I? Its heartwarming. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ayushee :-)
DeleteYou mock at my fear........
ReplyDeleteI searched for you,
In memories gray and black,
what a beautiful poem!
Thanks so much :-)
DeleteSuch heartache. You have written it well.
ReplyDeleteA parched smile, a tired sigh. Oh why is heartache so much more beautiful to write about?
ReplyDeleteThat's the beauty of sorrow :-)
DeleteIt's just a silly lie,like snow in desert, and wings that can not fly.... simply awesome!!
ReplyDeleteThe feelings coming out of this is intense and heart touching. Wonderful rhyming.
Thanks Simran :-)
DeleteIt's always night when the ache loss with a loss like this... always
ReplyDeleteYes, always :-)
Deletebeautifully rhymed! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mirage :-)
Deletebeautiful......you make us feel too.....!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
DeleteSuch pain in those words.. beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nisha :-)
DeleteAh...it aches... Touches the core!!
ReplyDelete'You mock at my fear,
The one that came true,
But I won't shed a tear,
'Cause this isn't anything new.'
LOVELY!
Thank You Red :-)
Deletethe feeling is real...ugh on the playing with that fear of loss,
ReplyDeleteonly to have it come true as well...i have been there ....too tired
to even cry...
Yeah...it's like that :-)
DeleteThe last line - sheer beauty! Lovely again :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna :-)
DeleteThe heart in pain churns out some of the most beautiful songs...The parched smile and the tired sigh at the end are like icing on the cake...
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
DeleteI really took a deep breath reading this. It's so beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Balqis :-)
Deletesimply awesome!! beautiful write! Amrit ji :))
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
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