I have also written a similar one... From "her" perspective... I understand that men and women feel the same way.. Only the way of expression vary... Goood!
So I come to your blog and I see a whole lotta blog post and haiku that I missed.. I just have to check them out and then I don't wanna leave! Haha! Love this Amrit! You told such a heartbreaking tale in only 13 syllables! Excellence!
Sometimes words can hurt...especially when they come from someone we love...
ReplyDeleteVery true :-)
Deletetouching lines !
ReplyDeleteThanks Milan :-)
DeleteWell done♪
ReplyDeleteWords are pointed daggers.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely !!!
DeleteVery touching!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeletePicturesque!
ReplyDeleteWords do have a sting, a lasting one at that. Good one, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
Deletebeautiful... :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Apurva :-)
DeleteWords harsh enough to chill the moon. I love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteI have also written a similar one... From "her" perspective...
ReplyDeleteI understand that men and women feel the same way.. Only the way of expression vary...
Goood!
Thanks Satya :-)
DeleteSo I come to your blog and I see a whole lotta blog post and haiku that I missed.. I just have to check them out and then I don't wanna leave! Haha! Love this Amrit! You told such a heartbreaking tale in only 13 syllables! Excellence!
ReplyDeleteThank You Crystal :-)
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